Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

[kontigobeats]

tripwire: liking the sound and melodies used in this one!
bassmagnet: i agree with trying to make the sounds mesh together a bit more in your one, but the drop is sounding good!

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Here's mine, I think its pretty finished so looking for some feedback, not sure whether to keep the different speed bassline in until the drop, but quite pleased with it overall as havnt been making beats long! needs a proper mix but any feedback appreciated! thanks

[tripwire22]

Recently learned how to use session view in ableton (I know I slack hard) and playing around with audio instead of midi.
Here's the unfinished result
I love - and + feedback.

im really liking this man/ im running on some shitty headfones so idk if u even have a sub but if u dont this song could use a real huge sub bassline under what u got. only problem is that all the sounds are nice but they need to meld together or something idk they somehow seem so seperated but maybe thats just me

I see what you mean now with the sounds being separated. What part were you talking about though? I'll get to the sub once I have most of the bassline down Thanks for digging anyways brotha.

listening again i personally think just get some better bongo samples?

[Bassmagnet]

Recently learned how to use session view in ableton (I know I slack hard) and playing around with audio instead of midi.
Here's the unfinished result
I love - and + feedback.

im really liking this man/ im running on some shitty headfones so idk if u even have a sub but if u dont this song could use a real huge sub bassline under what u got. only problem is that all the sounds are nice but they need to meld together or something idk they somehow seem so seperated but maybe thats just me

I see what you mean now with the sounds being separated. What part were you talking about though? I'll get to the sub once I have most of the bassline down Thanks for digging anyways brotha.

listening again i personally think just get some better bongo samples?

Yea at the beginning for sure, kinda just picked like the first 2 samples I came across hehe Will be tweaking it more for sure. Thanks again!

[Astral]

@Kotingo: Catchy sounds, nice drumwork. the midrange work could possibly have a bit more rawness to it. I don't think im explaining myself very well, but In my opinion a bit of mid-low growlyness wouldnt go amiss.

@trip: The new styled stuff is coming along quite well, not to sure about that 0:30-0:55 bit, twice feels like enough then you just impatient waiting for the drop , maybe a slight mixup.

Something a little different I sparked up in the early hours of this morning, reflecting my less than thrilled mood.

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[phrex]

as usual. no banger or wobbler from me... still hope for some feedback...
i know. it's just 55 sec. all i want to know is actually: is it interesting enough? can you feel it too? do you have the strong feeling of wanting to hear more?

if yes i'll continue. if no.. i gues si'll continue too

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[The Phantom Banger]

@phrex

got no headphones or speakers, but the waveform looks nice

[phrex]

@phrex

got no headphones or speakers, but the waveform looks nice

do you expect me to say thank you or smth?

[tripwire22]

@Kotingo: Catchy sounds, nice drumwork. the midrange work could possibly have a bit more rawness to it. I don't think im explaining myself very well, but In my opinion a bit of mid-low growlyness wouldnt go amiss.

@trip: The new styled stuff is coming along quite well, not to sure about that 0:30-0:55 bit, twice feels like enough then you just impatient waiting for the drop , maybe a slight mixup.

Something a little different I sparked up in the early hours of this morning, reflecting my less than thrilled mood.

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sounds like u woke up during the rain season in hell lol but its getting somewhere just keep on it

[JJisCooler]

ignore this post

[JJisCooler]

Heyyy this is my first track on reason..I've only been producing for 3-4 months so any advice would be GREATLY appreciated. thank youuu.

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[futures_untold]

Heyyy this is my first track on reason..I've only been producing for 3-4 months so any advice would be GREATLY appreciated. thank youuu.

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Generally good, but you need to eq everything with a high pass filter below 120Hz (except for your kick drum and sub). Also eq/filter the kick drum below 70Hz-100hz depending on how it interferes with the sub.

Generally great though, you have some nice synth effects and panorama going on.

Pat

[JJisCooler]

Heyyy this is my first track on reason..I've only been producing for 3-4 months so any advice would be GREATLY appreciated. thank youuu.

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Generally good, but you need to eq everything with a high pass filter below 120Hz (except for your kick drum and sub). Also eq/filter the kick drum below 70Hz-100hz depending on how it interferes with the sub.

Generally great though, you have some nice synth effects and panorama going on.

Pat

Thanks so much man! I'm new to this, so my eq'ing skills suck, but oh well I can work on it. Thanks for checking out the tune.

[futures_untold]

Heyyy this is my first track on reason..I've only been producing for 3-4 months so any advice would be GREATLY appreciated. thank youuu.

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Generally good, but you need to eq everything with a high pass filter below 120Hz (except for your kick drum and sub). Also eq/filter the kick drum below 70Hz-100hz depending on how it interferes with the sub.

Generally great though, you have some nice synth effects and panorama going on.

Pat

Thanks so much man! I'm new to this, so my eq'ing skills suck, but oh well I can work on it. Thanks for checking out the tune.

Thanks for sharing it with us.

Your eqing skills will evolve with a little practice

[cleanexecution]

Heyyy this is my first track on reason..I've only been producing for 3-4 months so any advice would be GREATLY appreciated. thank youuu.

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the only thing i can say is maybe work on song composition more? like figure out some solid sounds you wana work with and play around with makin loops and meshin them together

[cleanexecution]

smooth......at first I was like hmmm....then as it came along I dug the smoothness on it. not a bad start. maybe beef up the sub just a tad

maybe you could kill the synth halfway through and just have the wobble and drums playin, the mid tone from the synth through kinda kills that hyped vibe.. just me though

[cleanexecution]

alright.. so im workin on the song godzilla. still a WIP but i feel like i have an idea for the composition of the song. any feedback would be much appreciated! GODZILLAAA
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[The Phantom Banger]

alright.. so im workin on the song godzilla. still a WIP but i feel like i have an idea for the composition of the song. any feedback would be much appreciated! GODZILLAAA
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the synths after the drop could maybe do with a bit more volume?

[kontigobeats]

@JJiscooler not bad man but i agree try to get a bit more song composition to it, keep it up tho!
@cleanexecution sounding pretty good, got that dark vibe going on and the drums sound crisp.

didn't really get much feedback before so here's mine, I think its pretty finished, not sure whether to keep the different speed bassline in until the drop, but quite pleased with it overall as havnt been making beats long! needs a proper mix but any feedback appreciated! thanks

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[The Phantom Banger]

If you add, thephantombanger on aim i would love to give you some feedback eventually. Just hit me up on thursday night and all will be good

[The Phantom Banger]

Soundcloud Uploaded this cause waveform looked nice made with only 1 hour of sleep over 48 horuss so should be different form what i suaully do

would aprrectiae some tafdeabck