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delirium_p · Post by **delirium_p** » Wed Feb 25, 2009 9:02 pm

Keggah wrote:

I've got one in the works atm but I feel as if its lacking something...

http://www.zshare.net/audio/5601903914dc12e7/

-or on my Virb-

feedback please.

Safe.

(will try an get another review done 4 2morro)

Sounding Big Bruv , Im feeling this one stil , to me it actually sounds quite whole as a track much more and it might sound a lil cluttered, the reggae piano sound could be lowered a tad , but in all honesty i cant give 2 much feedback on sound quality as im listening on sum small shitty pc speakers

Nice work on this one doe

delirium_p · Post by **delirium_p** » Wed Feb 25, 2009 9:06 pm

zingy wrote:I've been makin dubstep in FL for like a month and this is the first thing that i think sounds okey. http://www.speedyshare.com/385825533.html

Give me some advices what i should do and not do.

THANKS

Sounds a lil empty to me , could do with having a few fills mayb or sum sfx and the bass sounds a lil overpowering ,
keep it up doe fam.

delirium_p · Post by **delirium_p** » Wed Feb 25, 2009 9:17 pm

CN wrote: I have some new tunes on my Virb and some New versions of old tunes too, would appreciate it if someone could have a listen and let me know what you think!

Here: http://virb.com/2649372446692430

Cheers!

Only had chance to listen to giv u love tune b4 virb started playin up and wouldnt let me play the other , tracks ok though, i like the drums and vocals in it its got quite a garagey feel to it , bass could be worked on a lil in my opinion its sounding a lil flat but apart from tht nice work stil

delirium_p · Post by **delirium_p** » Wed Feb 25, 2009 9:19 pm

I did a quick mixdown on this track and for sum reason sounds fine on my stereo and other stereos round the house but terrible on this pc so plz let me no what you think

Anyways this is my 1st dubstep track so would be grateful for sum feedback positive or negative
http://www.zshare.net/download/56175101e403431b/

safe.

awful · Post by **awful** » Wed Feb 25, 2009 10:14 pm

heres a mix of some unfinished tracks i did, http://imawful.com/awful-ohno.mp3 it's 320.. i still wanna work on the mix of the tracks but i had to get this out to see if anyone is feeling it, and if not, lookin for pointers.. thanks a lot

DeafMan · Post by **DeafMan** » Wed Feb 25, 2009 11:14 pm

Delirium_P wrote:
CN wrote: I have some new tunes on my Virb and some New versions of old tunes too, would appreciate it if someone could have a listen and let me know what you think!

Here: http://virb.com/2649372446692430

Cheers!
Only had chance to listen to giv u love tune b4 virb started playin up and wouldnt let me play the other , tracks ok though, i like the drums and vocals in it its got quite a garagey feel to it , bass could be worked on a lil in my opinion its sounding a lil flat but apart from tht nice work stil

Yeah I removed some synths from the tune because i thought that they cluttered it and i wanted it to have more of a garage feel to it. Since i removed them it has made me realise the bass is pretty weak really and I dont want to add a wobble cos its not the sort of tune where that works. I think it just needs livening up somehow.

deadly_habit · Post by **deadly_habit** » Thu Feb 26, 2009 2:10 am

Let's Be Blunt
http://www.myspace.com/deadlyhabit

delirium_p · Post by **delirium_p** » Thu Feb 26, 2009 2:02 pm

CN wrote:
Delirium_P wrote:
CN wrote: I have some new tunes on my Virb and some New versions of old tunes too, would appreciate it if someone could have a listen and let me know what you think!

Here: http://virb.com/2649372446692430

Cheers!
Only had chance to listen to giv u love tune b4 virb started playin up and wouldnt let me play the other , tracks ok though, i like the drums and vocals in it its got quite a garagey feel to it , bass could be worked on a lil in my opinion its sounding a lil flat but apart from tht nice work stil
Yeah I removed some synths from the tune because i thought that they cluttered it and i wanted it to have more of a garage feel to it. Since i removed them it has made me realise the bass is pretty weak really and I dont want to add a wobble cos its not the sort of tune where that works. I think it just needs livening up somehow.

I think mayb a funky bassline runnin alongside a dark bassline would work well.

DeafMan · Post by **DeafMan** » Thu Feb 26, 2009 3:25 pm

Delirium_P wrote:
CN wrote:
Delirium_P wrote:
CN wrote: I have some new tunes on my Virb and some New versions of old tunes too, would appreciate it if someone could have a listen and let me know what you think!

Here: http://virb.com/2649372446692430

Cheers!
Only had chance to listen to giv u love tune b4 virb started playin up and wouldnt let me play the other , tracks ok though, i like the drums and vocals in it its got quite a garagey feel to it , bass could be worked on a lil in my opinion its sounding a lil flat but apart from tht nice work stil
Yeah I removed some synths from the tune because i thought that they cluttered it and i wanted it to have more of a garage feel to it. Since i removed them it has made me realise the bass is pretty weak really and I dont want to add a wobble cos its not the sort of tune where that works. I think it just needs livening up somehow.
I think mayb a funky bassline runnin alongside a dark bassline would work well.

How do you mean a funky bassline? Just something more upbeat and with more regular notes? Dunno if i totally undestand what you mean.

delirium_p · Post by **delirium_p** » Thu Feb 26, 2009 3:29 pm

Yea in a way, jus more upbeat but a more slap string style bass similar to off old garage tunes , hard to explain what i mean but upbeat regular notes with a funky slap bass contrasted with a dark bass would work well imo , dark and light go together very well imo

if u get time can u giv some feedback on my track posted few above yours
safe.

DeafMan · Post by **DeafMan** » Thu Feb 26, 2009 4:56 pm

Yeah i see what you mean cheers for the advice.

Ill take a listen to your tracks sooon.

ketamine · Post by **ketamine** » Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:18 am

Go To Sleep

deadly_habit · Post by **deadly_habit** » Sat Feb 28, 2009 2:10 pm

baz1manor wrote:
Deadly Habit wrote:Let's Be Blunt
http://www.myspace.com/deadlyhabit
Lol, i thought you was trying to prove a point with that post....until i got to the last tune in your player.

Lets be blunt has a nice feel to it, lots of atmosphere but i think its a tad dull, im not sure about the guitar plucks melody with the bass melody, it sounds dizzy and a bit random. it all sounds good on the speakers, nothing sticking out and out of place. the drum pattern is boppy and not repetitive.

all in all a nice track, deffo not one i would dance too but i dont think you was going that way anyway.

Synesthesia is a mental track mate, just how much of that is real and how much samples/vst's ect.... im curious.

Baz.

(thats my 3, now i can get some )

synesthesia was made with 100% samples if i recall correctly

deadly_habit · Post by **deadly_habit** » Sat Feb 28, 2009 2:11 pm

baz1manor wrote:http://soundcloud.com/bazzle/bazzle-oasis

i know it is sounding dull but not sure on what to do with it, and id like some comments on the low end, as my monitors seem to lie alot where they are placed at the moment.

Cheers for your time.

marked to check when i fire up my monitors in a while
(just woke up)

deadly_habit · Post by **deadly_habit** » Sat Feb 28, 2009 3:29 pm

baz1manor wrote:http://soundcloud.com/bazzle/bazzle-oasis

i know it is sounding dull but not sure on what to do with it, and id like some comments on the low end, as my monitors seem to lie alot where they are placed at the moment.

Cheers for your time.

might want to layer a sine wave under the bassline, also on the mid sound i'd process it a bit more maybe some slight distortion and verb
only other suggestion is toss in some stabs here and there

delirium_p · Post by **delirium_p** » Sat Feb 28, 2009 4:12 pm

baz1manor wrote:http://soundcloud.com/bazzle/bazzle-oasis

i know it is sounding dull but not sure on what to do with it, and id like some comments on the low end, as my monitors seem to lie alot where they are placed at the moment.

Cheers for your time.

Safe for the feedback bruv , tryna mix down on 5 pound headphones is not the way, so im grateful for the advice on levels etc, i can see what you mean about the structure im not sure wether to do something about this though or just not bother with the track ,

Anyway im feeling your track its got a nice vibe to it , as i said ive only got cheap headphones so cant give too much advice on the low end , but i agree with dirty habit i do feel like the bass could do with a sine underlying it to give it a bit more of a presence also i feel like the samples that are used throughout the track could be boosted a lil more to give the track some brightness

Good work on this though im feeling this one stil.

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