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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JULY, 2010
Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 2:38 am
by HAACK
legend4ry wrote:Soundcloud
^ heres my new one.
@ WeedCali - its really interesting, I am not sure how i'd take it but I am very interested in where you take it. I will say the mix does sound a bit muddy though, even on soundcloud.
@ oscarhenson - All I can say is WOW! That is a piece of beauty, not music haha" I really like it, my only advice would be to progress it faster/more as it does get a tad repetitive, the synths mainly, the drums are fine!
@ Haack - Great sub work, really liking the drums and the little echo's here and there within them! AMAZING atmosphere, progresses nicely, i think you need to work on the midrange a bit more, if it was a bit more structured it'll fit more, the wobble doesn't seem to fit though but the high attack bass does!
Thanks really appreciate it, goin to work these out, was actually wondering if I should keep that around or not, goin to experiment a bit more on this one!
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JULY, 2010
Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 6:25 am
by Sirius
will post up some replies l8a... in abit of a mish.
what yall reckon? something different.. like half done!!chea
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JULY, 2010
Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 10:46 am
by spunkstain
http://soundcloud.com/lee-k-dubstep/jul ... n-progress
Started this last night, last time i posted a tune on here nobody got back to me! but anyway feedback is welcome
safe
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JULY, 2010
Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 10:47 am
by spunkstain
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make it easier for you all ^
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JULY, 2010
Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 12:37 pm
by benjam
Yo liking this dude espes around 2 min when the bongos come in. Listened to flashes as well thats so sick really liking both of those
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JULY, 2010
Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 12:44 pm
by benjam
Couple of tunes ive been working on finally got my internet sorted (it broke a couple of days after I registered) Thanks in advance for any feedback. cheers.
http://soundcloud.com/shelfstacker/i-will-wip
http://soundcloud.com/shelfstacker/the-last-show-wip
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JULY, 2010
Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 3:53 pm
by JBE
A remix I started working on. Kind of out there a bit on this one. I haven't got a lot of it done yet. This is just sort of a possible arrangement idea. I'm actually thinking about beginning with the drum part first, and then using the intro as a breakdown later on rather than starting with it. I don't know, pretty much just an idea at the moment.
I will be leaving feedback, probably tomorrow morning or later tonight if I don't end up having to work. Ended up putting all my free time this morning into this.
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JULY, 2010
Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 4:16 pm
by Project_B
So like yeh I got this tune and im really feeling the vibe and style, not sure where to take it or what to add to it. Want to keep it on the minimal tip and avoid cluttering it up. Any suggestions?
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JULY, 2010
Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 4:24 pm
by Project_B
Really feeling "i will" man - the drums feel really organic and human. really nice flow and rhythm. this was actually quite refreshing, stoked!
Sirius wrote:will post up some replies l8a... in abit of a mish.
what yall reckon? something different.. like half done!!chea
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This is an interesting vibe man definatly somthing to push. Though i must say for my that snare doesnt work, in my opinion. Hard to put a finger on what but I think it just doesnt agree with the kick. might just be me though, its your track! Sick sound tho.
Feeling this vibe. really dark half step stuff. ace. i know its a WIP and youll probably get round to this but I feel like juggling up the drums some, maybe being some new hits in here and there or some hats to add some swing could really work. I mean, not all the time, just so it progresses to a final point ya know?
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JULY, 2010
Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 4:33 pm
by JBE
Project_B wrote:So like yeh I got this tune and im really feeling the vibe and style, not sure where to take it or what to add to it. Want to keep it on the minimal tip and avoid cluttering it up. Any suggestions?
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I like the feel of it, but it does definitely need some more.
You should vary that sliding mid range sound you used. Change up the notes every once in awhile to help with the repetitiveness of the track. Try slipping a pad in there. Not a big one, but just something to give it a bit more fullness. Maybe add in some sort of stab type sound right after one of the slides on the mid range, or even just like a bell sound or some other harmonic sound to help appeal to the ear of the listener. Just like a 2 or 3 note descending melody on the stab/bell, and drop the volume level a bit so it sort of sits behind everything else, but still noticeable.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JULY, 2010
Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 4:56 pm
by Project_B
JBE wrote:Project_B wrote:So like yeh I got this tune and im really feeling the vibe and style, not sure where to take it or what to add to it. Want to keep it on the minimal tip and avoid cluttering it up. Any suggestions?
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I like the feel of it, but it does definitely need some more.
You should vary that sliding mid range sound you used. Change up the notes every once in awhile to help with the repetitiveness of the track. Try slipping a pad in there. Not a big one, but just something to give it a bit more fullness. Maybe add in some sort of stab type sound right after one of the slides on the mid range, or even just like a bell sound or some other harmonic sound to help appeal to the ear of the listener. Just like a 2 or 3 note descending melody on the stab/bell, and drop the volume level a bit so it sort of sits behind everything else, but still noticeable.
alright word, gonna give this all a bash later on; cheers for the fresh perspective!
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JULY, 2010
Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 5:14 pm
by RUDEBOY
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JULY, 2010
Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 7:38 pm
by ObsidiaMusic
@Rudeboy : It made me laugh, haha. I don't know what to say, it's alright but it isn't really my style. It needs more variation, especially on all the 'game' sounds as they got pretty annoying after a bit!
This is something I have been working on all day, it's my second Dubstep track! Hope you like the sounds.
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Any feedback would be appreciated!
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JULY, 2010
Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 7:53 pm
by charliefoy
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Started today, unmixed and all that. Only been on it a few hours. All kinds of feedback appreciated
I will return! (the feedback that is...)
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JULY, 2010
Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 7:54 pm
by hakka
Been working on this today, minus the weed hahaha
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Feedback for Feedback, you know the drill (step)
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JULY, 2010
Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 8:04 pm
by charliefoy
hakka wrote:Been working on this today, minus the weed hahaha
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Feedback for Feedback, you know the drill (step)
Sounds nice
Love the vocal. Maybe try and vary the intro abit? Introduce different sounds at different times could be good.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JULY, 2010
Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 8:11 pm
by hakka
Cheers mate, yeah deffo. Yet to add any delayed bleeps and FX. Will be a monster no doubt!
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JULY, 2010
Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 8:12 pm
by ObsidiaMusic
@Hakka : It's nice, although I think you need more variation for sure. Vocals fit well though, for sure.
@charliefoy : I would like to comment on this, but it isn't my style. I guess I could comment on the mix-down, which sounds pretty solid!
Any feedback on my preview a few posts up would really be appreciated.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JULY, 2010
Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 8:34 pm
by charliefoy
@ObsidiaMusic
I went for a minimal style if you didnt notice...haha
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JULY, 2010
Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 8:35 pm
by mashmash
@charliefoy i like the ambience of it, although you could make the intro a bit more interesting. overall you need to add more stuff in it to keep it interesting but it's sounding nice
@obsidiamusic not my sorta thing so i can't really say much, but it sounds clean and well produced, keep adding stuff to it
here's this i've been working on, some of the vocals are a bit out of time at the first part, so ignore that, and it's not really dubstep to let you know first
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