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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 5:39 pm
by cleanexecution
The Phantom Banger wrote:Soundcloud Uploaded this cause waveform looked nice

made with only 1 hour of sleep over 48 horuss so should be different form what i suaully do
would aprrectiae some tafdeabck
the bass is kinda crazy and chaotic.. at least to me. if you moved it around to fit the drums more it would sound mint. some good bass sounds
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 6:29 pm
by marshy
I'm not at my uni room with my monitors so can't really comment on production issues like EQ but can give some help on other things.
Cleanexecution - Godzilla
Really like the intro, nice use of a vocal sample for once. Gives off a really eerie tone, perhaps reflect this with delay on the odd snare? I'd also throw in some more cymbals, i use these more than hi-hats now. Get a nice delay on them too and you can get them bouncing.
As for the drop i think the little silence at the end of the Godzillaaaa is too much. As the first note when it drops is pretty quiet, i'd make it so it hits on the 'ziLAAAA' part of the sample. Kinda hard to explain but if you want me to put that another way let me know!
JJisCooler - Singularity
Think the biggest issue is EQ like others have mentioned, once you seperate the sounds it could potentially sound great. Really like the drum pattern and how it's not reliant on the snare on the 3rd at all times.
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This is my newest WIP, started it this morning and been on it all day! Really like the intro and the bass sounds, just need to variate the vowel sounds on the bass really. Also like i said, i don't have my monitors so having real problems EQing and mixing with these shitty computer speakers. Hardly any EQ done so far;
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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 6:31 pm
by Astral
Thought Id just update my last post, Im not usually into the whole long intro thing, but this had a feel about it so.
It is just the intro so far. It's a kind of, twisted dark, donnie darko-esq random dubsoundscape.
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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 7:35 pm
by Imperial
@ Astral: that is a long into lol, likeing it tho, got that dark feel to it, could of dropped it hardd
feedback on my new tune is much apprieciated

big upss!
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this is the dubstep version, go to my soundcloud for the drumstep(half step dnb) one
http://soundcloud.com/imperial-2
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 9:05 pm
by nicenice
First time here. Been making random bits & pieces for a while but this is the first thats really come together properly, would be great to have some feedback thanks.
I'm not really sure where to take this atm.
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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 9:10 pm
by Lichee
The Phantom Banger wrote:Soundcloud Uploaded this cause waveform looked nice

made with only 1 hour of sleep over 48 horuss so should be different form what i suaully do
would aprrectiae some tafdeabck
big tune. party + drugs + this tune would be funny. can imagine trying to dance and looking like a tit. if you get this tune made proper drop me a message ill be more than happy to accept a 320

Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 1:08 am
by Karoshi
cleanexecution wrote:alright.. so im workin on the song godzilla. still a WIP but i feel like i have an idea for the composition of the song. any feedback would be much appreciated! GODZILLAAA
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sorry cant be much help cos im listening on my laptop speakers
just wanted to say though that i love that metallic synth sound! sounds mental!
anyone fancy giving this a listen? very early days yet mind
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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 3:26 am
by adamiam
Please check this out if you have a moment.
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Be as harsh as you like
Thanks
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 6:19 am
by Karanp
The Phantom Banger wrote:Soundcloud Uploaded this cause waveform looked nice

made with only 1 hour of sleep over 48 horuss so should be different form what i suaully do
would aprrectiae some tafdeabck

stays true to the title. i think that change in the rhythm is wayyy too suden, fix that up, apart from that i think its fun haha.
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something i just started. feedback would be appreciated

Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 9:21 am
by wabble
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First post on dubstep forum, been trolling for a couple months now. Big thanks to Yoni and Futures for getting my wobble game going
*THIS IS MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT A WOBBLE PATTERN/COMPLETE TRACK*
Needs work..
I kno the wobbles clip during the vocal drops
I need to make the beat more interesting, just have 3 loops running
The wobbles need to be structured better, maybe make the pitch changes match the wobbles
Hopefully the mix is okay, thats about all I would say is near complete but it was done with headphones
Next posting I'll have a second wobble variation for 16 or 32 bars, better drum pattern, some musical elements and eventually rewire everything so I can fade everything nicely and lose those mute/solo clippings.
Please, some feedback... how's the wobble sound? Sub bass? My wind? Decent mix? Keep in mind those and the drum loops are all that's in here so if anyone has suggestions for an instrument part you think would sit well in the mix let me kno.
Thanks
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 10:55 am
by Geeza
you whats really hood peeps.
back on the forum after major craptop problems seemed to be sorted now so started to crack open reason again :
heres something ive started recently kinda left it for a while so i can come up with fresh ideas so im aware this needs a lot of work as it is at the mo but feedback and a few pointers will be greatly appreciated an recipricated
enjoy (or not as the case may be)
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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 10:59 am
by Geeza
wabble wrote:Soundcloud
First post on dubstep forum, been trolling for a couple months now. Big thanks to Yoni and Futures for getting my wobble game going
*THIS IS MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT A WOBBLE PATTERN/COMPLETE TRACK*
Needs work..
I kno the wobbles clip during the vocal drops
I need to make the beat more interesting, just have 3 loops running
The wobbles need to be structured better, maybe make the pitch changes match the wobbles
Hopefully the mix is okay, thats about all I would say is near complete but it was done with headphones
Next posting I'll have a second wobble variation for 16 or 32 bars, better drum pattern, some musical elements and eventually rewire everything so I can fade everything nicely and lose those mute/solo clippings.
Please, some feedback... how's the wobble sound? Sub bass? My wind? Decent mix? Keep in mind those and the drum loops are all that's in here so if anyone has suggestions for an instrument part you think would sit well in the mix let me kno.
Thanks
O my this is dark!!!!! love the sub bass and the wobble compliments it perfectly. Love the vox sample and the build up is great. i agree with making the wobbes more interesting but be carefull not to go over the top. pitch change to match the wobble would be great. all in all this this great i love this exactly my type of dub i love listening too great stuff man much respect
Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010
Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 11:05 am
by wabble
Geeza wrote:wabble wrote:Soundcloud
First post on dubstep forum, been trolling for a couple months now. Big thanks to Yoni and Futures for getting my wobble game going
*THIS IS MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT A WOBBLE PATTERN/COMPLETE TRACK*
Needs work..
I kno the wobbles clip during the vocal drops
I need to make the beat more interesting, just have 3 loops running
The wobbles need to be structured better, maybe make the pitch changes match the wobbles
Hopefully the mix is okay, thats about all I would say is near complete but it was done with headphones
Next posting I'll have a second wobble variation for 16 or 32 bars, better drum pattern, some musical elements and eventually rewire everything so I can fade everything nicely and lose those mute/solo clippings.
Please, some feedback... how's the wobble sound? Sub bass? My wind? Decent mix? Keep in mind those and the drum loops are all that's in here so if anyone has suggestions for an instrument part you think would sit well in the mix let me kno.
Thanks
O my this is dark!!!!! love the sub bass and the wobble compliments it perfectly. Love the vox sample and the build up is great. i agree with making the wobbes more interesting but be carefull not to go over the top. pitch change to match the wobble would be great. all in all this this great i love this exactly my type of dub i love listening too great stuff man much respect
glad u like... this is prob my fav kind of dub so ull hear more soon