FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010

ReZiNdRiP · Post by **ReZiNdRiP** » Sun May 02, 2010 6:52 am

I'm new to producing dubstep.. was wanderin what people thought of my trackz - http://rezindripdub.bandcamp.com

IM LOOKIN TO COLLAB WITH CATS TOO FOR MY NEXT ALBUM.. GET AT ME IF YOUR SERIOUS BOUT UR MUSIQ!!!

TM45 · Post by **TM45** » Sun May 02, 2010 2:38 pm

Finally made something I think is worthy of a listening. Quite melodramatic, but enjoyable IMO.

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Any feedback much appreciated

kaiori breathe · Post by **kaiori breathe** » Sun May 02, 2010 2:45 pm

Sorry for the delay getting feedback to you guys. Been working on some video-game music for the last 3 days that took priority over everything due to a short deadline. Hope you guys don't mind.

reignz wrote:
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/327575

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Thanks for the crit. I see what you mean about the structure. It's kind of all over the place. I listened to your track on new grounds and it's pretty cool. Couldn't fault it even if I wanted to. Nice melodies, great production, great sounds. Nothing really to say except that it's a great track all round.

Second track sounds great too. Really dark. Again great sounds. Good samples too. I'd be terrified to use samples from the Matrix given the amount of hate the movie received when they released a third one lol, but you really pulled it off. It works great. Plus your samples are from the first movie so you totally get away with it

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Great bass sounds too.

@ TM45, great track man, nice minimal vibes, good sounds. Not particularly my style but I enjoyed it none the less, managed to listen the whole way through and enjoy it, which is rare for me when listening to something in this style, so that should hopefully say something quite positive about your track.

fassyman wrote: heres my new one...its unmastered but its almost there
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Ridiculously good track. Really sick Asian/India vibes as far as the percussion goes. Great intro too, really dark. Really dark the whole way through. Second drop is great. Really great work on getting all those rhythmic movements to work with each other. Nice pads too wobbling gently in the background. Very nice.

@bowler, that track on youtube is fantastic. Weird samples, but I they work lol.

@mexter dorgan I think I saw somebody say they didn't like the drums and sounds in your track. Just to add a little counter-point to that I'd like to say that I think while it's not particularly the style of dubstep I'd really listen to I think there's definitely a lot of people who'd like that track. There are some samples that sound a tad pointless to me like the broken glass. But overall your sounds aren't bad and you've got good production skills.

@aftee: In the rain is faultless. A really beautiful track with great vibes and brilliant sounds. Nice sub. If I'm totally honest I sometimes have difficulty listening to some of the tracks in this thread the whole way through without skipping to parts and jumping around them. But I managed to get the whole way through yours and enjoy it. You build well on a lot of really simple ideas and it works fantastically. I'd have maybe slowly faded the rain out. Somewhere at the 1 min mark then faded it back in for the thunder. But that's just personal taste. I can't imagine too many people really complaining about that. Nice vocal sample too.

I'll crit some more later on tonight when I've more time

WeedKeepa · Post by **WeedKeepa** » Sun May 02, 2010 4:53 pm

Latest track in the sig 'Run Down'. Any feedback appreciated

reignstep · Post by **reignstep** » Sun May 02, 2010 5:25 pm

@TM45: it's good, pretty oldskool stuff ^^ but seems like you only have your drums and a bassline running after the drop. Also (the way i hear it through my speakers) I noticed that you could turn your sub down an octave atleast.

@Weedkeepa: see soundcloud ^^

Still lookin for some feedback on this one :
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jaydot · Post by **jaydot** » Sun May 02, 2010 6:34 pm

@fassyman: Tight....nice work on the pads and the percussion. The intro is kinnnd of too long but it's worth it to hear the sub kick in on the first drop, nice one

@Weedkeepa: That's like something out of a film noir, excellent, really original.

Not mastered, needs some work on the levels but:

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