WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

[redjuan]

@globalbabylon thanks for the feedback,enjoyed the progression and feel to ur track,nice tune man.

@engol.this is quite nice but u need to clean ur drums up,hi hats seemed off at times,clouding the mix.put bigger sub on this and clean it up and i think it'd have real potential,hope that helps,good work.

heres a bit ive finished/kinda wip if anyone fancies a listen ill throw them feedback

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[tripwire22]

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[GRAYSKALE]

Just recieved a terrible 'compliment' from sister about this track - she said it sounds like pendulum!! bitch - lol
Anyways its not even close to finished but i thought Id get you guys opinions if ya don't mind =D

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@Redjuan - Loving this track bro - really mellow and progressive, keep up the good work
@Tripwire - same again really feeling the mellow vibes!!

[a.paul]

thanks to everyone giving me feedback. forgot my laptop at a friends house. so excuse the lack of feedback on other peoples tracks.
going to make a coffee and listen to all of them! haha
feedback coming soon!

[a.paul]

@Sparks_[Productions] - I'd change the LFO rate around 1:25 in the track, and maybe boost the bass up a little, maybe some eq, the presence of the bass is lost in the distortion in my opinion.
Like the drums a lot! keep it up.

@Goldorak - loving the build up to the bass drop, percussion and pads are spot on too! the bass line kind of reminds me of jakes! very impressed.
the only thing id change is the kick drum, kind of has a hollow (bongo) sound to it.
would deff like to play this out though, loving the baseline and glitchy sounds during the breaks.

@Globalbabylon - loving the purple vibes. vocal sample works great too. i really like what you've done percussion wise as well

more feedback to come.
loving everyones tunes though.

[benjam]

Hey all this the first track ive got close to finishing only been doing this since mid-feb was curious to see what people would say so here it is peace and cheers for any feedback.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2vPI89RIbYw

[GRAYSKALE]

@benjamenC - that tune is pretty good mate - the bassline from 0.40 sounds a little muddy though try EQing the mids around 200Hz a bit to clear that up - also I recon with the style youre going for try working on hooks rather than just basslines - that's what the pro's like caspa,benga cookie monsta, trolley snatcha etc have!! Keep it up though bro its sounding good!

[Sparks_[Productions]]

Thanks @redjuan, @globalbabylon & @a.paul for the feedback.

@benjaminC - track sounds good but the bass is to loud and muddy try EQing the lower frequencies down a bit.

@GRAYSKALE - track has potential decent drums and bass keep up the good work.

@tripwire22 - nice drums but lead seems to get tiring all the way through the track.

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more feedback would be appreciated

[ariosa]

Let me know what you think
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[GRAYSKALE]

@ Arisoa - you seem to have the ideas mate just need to work on mixdown skills - fattening up the drums a tad, eqing here and there and adding in some delays and reverbs to fill the space in the mix - also you have an unconventional approach to song structure which is always nice , keeping it fresh - keep at it bro

[vw63notch]

@Arisoa- feeln the tracks

[samkablaam]

@ grayscale - sounds good. the wobbles very middley, sounds too lp filtered to me. maybe thats what you're going for. also, theres not much other than the wobble and the drums (levels wise). good piece tho.

@sparks - cool, wobbble seems really syncopated, but mix wise pretty good. overall more compression maybe. but this is for works in progress i guess...

@ariosa - 1st one sounds good. maybe a bit more bass, feels like it wants some.


not dubstep again, but i value everyones opinion, and not sure what i want to do with it or leave it....
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[ENZA]

New lil work in progreess i was working on today gimme sum suggestions and where shud i go from here??

thanks!

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[Bassmagnet]

@ENZA: Good track man, real chill vibes, real uplifting. However, it lacks kick, beef that kick up some, maybe even a new sample? Nice clean bass too, keep this one in your "To Finish" pile.


Been working on this for a bit, loving the end mostly... If you can, turn this beast up as much as you can
Let know the +'s and -'s!
Thanks brothas!
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[vw63notch]

can i get some criticism =)

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[samkablaam]

@enza = criticise someone elses tracks first.

@notch - criticise someone elses tracks first.

this thread isnt a one way ting

[Muta]

@ENZA: Good track man, real chill vibes, real uplifting. However, it lacks kick, beef that kick up some, maybe even a new sample? Nice clean bass too, keep this one in your "To Finish" pile.


Been working on this for a bit, loving the end mostly... If you can, turn this beast up as much as you can
Let know the +'s and -'s!
Thanks brothas!
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hey man, nice track you got there, tho its not really my cup -o- tea haha.. Dont really have anything to say on it actually, Liking it ;3




Could I get some Feed on this thin i working at? :3 'tis nice and glitchy after the drop heh.

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[Bassmagnet]

@ENZA: Good track man, real chill vibes, real uplifting. However, it lacks kick, beef that kick up some, maybe even a new sample? Nice clean bass too, keep this one in your "To Finish" pile.


Been working on this for a bit, loving the end mostly... If you can, turn this beast up as much as you can
Let know the +'s and -'s!
Thanks brothas!
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hey man, nice track you got there, tho its not really my cup -o- tea haha.. Dont really have anything to say on it actually, Liking it ;3



Hey thanks brotha, but thats kinda lame :/

[earth tremor]

Hey all, I'm trying some stuff out. With this track I'm trying to get some kind of fusion between 2-step and Industrial. I always like to challenge myself to making "odd" beats. This one isn't for everybody, I suspect.

I'm not altogether that far, and I feel like I need some help with it. What kind of lead should I go for? It needs more variation definitely, for now it's just looping so you can feel the groove.

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Any comments/criticisms are appreciated.

Cheers!

[GRAYSKALE]

@ earth tremor - good track bro - you using the glitch plugin? I think what the song needs is a bit more melody - I know youre going for the industrial sound but if you cant find some dark ambient lead tones and then switch up the beat and add some funky half bars here and there to add to the 'odd' feel of it - sounds like youve done a decent job of FX and Mixing though - keep it up bro

Check out Mark 3 of my tune Crank Mk II - lol
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safe