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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 12:27 pm
by antihero
HicksPhonix wrote:Bassmagnet wrote:Soundcloud
Just finished this one for a remix contest! I'm mixing on stereo speakers, so let me know if anything is sounding shittay.
the tune sounds nice, not a fan of these bass sounds though. Speaking of bass... where is the sub? There's hardly any low...
I listnen on studiomonitors btw.. If you don't have acces to studio monitors, use a freq analyser to check your low end. I think you will
notice there's hardly any low end.
Big up though!
Where's your subwoofer? 'cos there definately is low bass in there. It's barely audible, but shakes my floor when I play it. Way to go Bassmagnet!
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 4:11 pm
by Bassmagnet
antihero wrote:HicksPhonix wrote:Bassmagnet wrote:Soundcloud
Just finished this one for a remix contest! I'm mixing on stereo speakers, so let me know if anything is sounding shittay.
the tune sounds nice, not a fan of these bass sounds though. Speaking of bass... where is the sub? There's hardly any low...
I listnen on studiomonitors btw.. If you don't have acces to studio monitors, use a freq analyser to check your low end. I think you will
notice there's hardly any low end.
Big up though!
Where's your subwoofer? 'cos there definately is low bass in there. It's barely audible, but shakes my floor when I play it. Way to go Bassmagnet!
Thanks guys! Yea I am mixing on stereo speakers hehe. And to tell you the truth, I have always mixed on stereo speakers and wouldn't even know what the analyzer should look like with the sub at the right level >.< any hints? I guess I could try and throw a song by excision in hehe
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 4:25 pm
by CollisionCourse
CollisionCourse wrote:@ we bang
big samples to start with and on the drop too. the drums are and bassline are both nice but could be a bit more experimental if you get me - i feel like ive heard those doens of times before. the variation overall is spot on, but i think that vocal sample is rinsed a bit. should take it out for a few bars a let the bassline sit, well i would anyway. the second drop is sick and like i said the variation is sick. its listenable, would go well in the club, good work.
@ phantom badger
the synth on the intro is nice but i think its a bit too panned to the left. i love the way the melody builds and the drop is nice, think the sub needs bringing up a tiny bit if im being really picky. i like the break down of the drums at 1.22. despite you working the melody very well and variating it alot, i still think a few background pads here and there wont hurt, to add a bit more depth to it. like the outro too, well done.
heres my new one, check it out
Soundcloud
and heres my other one for those who missed it
Soundcloud
later
anyone?
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 4:30 pm
by zonetrooper5
Just finished another songso check it out, also a free download on my soundcloud page if you really like it.
Soundcloud
If you hate Souncloud then listen to it on my youtube page when I upload it and my myspace page.
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 8:39 pm
by the2bos
Soundcloud
short mix of all originals
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 9:31 pm
by AllConsumer
Hey Guys,
Im new to this producing/mixing lark and just thought it post up my first remix for some comments.
Constructive please.
Many Thanks
AllConsumer
x
Soundcloud
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 10:07 pm
by Temo
the2bos wrote:Soundcloud
short mix of all originals
you've got quite a strange and interesting style, nothing really clicks from the mix, but keep at it and one eventually will.
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 10:10 pm
by Temo
zonetrooper5 wrote:Just finished another songso check it out, also a free download on my soundcloud page if you really like it.
Soundcloud
If you hate Souncloud then listen to it on my youtube page when I upload it and my myspace page.
pretty standard, the way youve put reverb on some of the sounds is quite intresting
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 10:17 pm
by Temo
CollisionCourse wrote:CollisionCourse wrote:@ we bang
big samples to start with and on the drop too. the drums are and bassline are both nice but could be a bit more experimental if you get me - i feel like ive heard those doens of times before. the variation overall is spot on, but i think that vocal sample is rinsed a bit. should take it out for a few bars a let the bassline sit, well i would anyway. the second drop is sick and like i said the variation is sick. its listenable, would go well in the club, good work.
@ phantom badger
the synth on the intro is nice but i think its a bit too panned to the left. i love the way the melody builds and the drop is nice, think the sub needs bringing up a tiny bit if im being really picky. i like the break down of the drums at 1.22. despite you working the melody very well and variating it alot, i still think a few background pads here and there wont hurt, to add a bit more depth to it. like the outro too, well done.
heres my new one, check it out
Soundcloud
and heres my other one for those who missed it
Soundcloud
later
anyone?
1st one, doesnt sound developed enough, and mostly simplistic
2nd one, again quite simplistic, way youve done the guiro + drums is quite sick though
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 10:23 pm
by Temo
bogtrotter2step wrote:Soundcloud
Just finished this one, lemme know what u guys think
sick
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 10:37 pm
by Temo
Soundcloud
any feedback appreciated
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 11:19 pm
by Olux
Hey Dubbers,
So i dont know if i've quite mastered mixing yet but here's a track i could really use some feedback on.
CHECK IT OUT @
http://www.soundcloud.com/olux/culture- ... x123htgf85
CHEERS!
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 11:56 pm
by WeBang
CollisionCourse wrote:CollisionCourse wrote:@ we bang
big samples to start with and on the drop too. the drums are and bassline are both nice but could be a bit more experimental if you get me - i feel like ive heard those doens of times before. the variation overall is spot on, but i think that vocal sample is rinsed a bit. should take it out for a few bars a let the bassline sit, well i would anyway. the second drop is sick and like i said the variation is sick. its listenable, would go well in the club, good work.
@ phantom badger
the synth on the intro is nice but i think its a bit too panned to the left. i love the way the melody builds and the drop is nice, think the sub needs bringing up a tiny bit if im being really picky. i like the break down of the drums at 1.22. despite you working the melody very well and variating it alot, i still think a few background pads here and there wont hurt, to add a bit more depth to it. like the outro too, well done.
heres my new one, check it out
Soundcloud
and heres my other one for those who missed it
Soundcloud
later
anyone?
Both tracks are cool for the style. Nice drum work. Not simple tracks but not a whole lot going on
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Mar 06, 2010 12:00 am
by WeBang
Temo wrote:bogtrotter2step wrote:Soundcloud
Just finished this one, lemme know what u guys think
sick
Bogtrotter is the man. Sick tune for sure.
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Mar 06, 2010 9:32 am
by Max4Beats
zonetrooper5 wrote:Just finished another songso check it out, also a free download on my soundcloud page if you really like it.
Soundcloud
If you hate Souncloud then listen to it on my youtube page when I upload it and my myspace page.
OK
0.00 - 0.15 Cool arpegiating kinda synth, nice hats
0.16 - 0.40 Change the beat a bit, and the Snare sample
0.40 - 1.01 Build up is cool
1.02 - 1.29 This is more like it now, that riff was sweet
1.30 - 2.30 You lost it here man, You need to keep that riff from before, Theres too much of a change here, it needs to more melodic, Relying too much on the wobble, theres no real melody, No Hook, Its boring
3.41 - 4.00 This is the kinda hook you want, You need to build that up and make a song around that!
Overall Theres parts that have potential so I wouldn't delete it just re structure it and get a bit more bassy! The ways it put together at the moment is just boring but parts do have potential. Keep working on it
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Mar 06, 2010 9:36 am
by Max4Beats
AllConsumer wrote:Hey Guys,
Im new to this producing/mixing lark and just thought it post up my first remix for some comments.
Constructive please.
Many Thanks
AllConsumer
x
Soundcloud
You got the beats spot on but I'm not feeling it, the 2 songs don't really go!
The beat matching is perfect though
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Mar 06, 2010 9:40 am
by Max4Beats
Check out my newest
What ye think?
Soundcloud
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Mar 06, 2010 9:58 am
by Muta
Reposting this track, posted it 2 pages ago, and still have not recieved any feedback or whatsoever :/
Soundcloud
Thank you..
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Mar 06, 2010 10:16 am
by Max4Beats
Muta wrote:Reposting this track, posted it 2 pages ago, and still have not recieved any feedback or whatsoever :/
Soundcloud
Thank you..
0.00 - 0.22 This is sounding cool
0.22 - 1.03 Cool like the bassline
1.05 - 1.34 I'd get rid of that Fruity Loops ride But this breakdown is great
1.49 - 2.19 Nice Change Here
Overall - Cool track, could still be a bit heavier and I'd get rid of that rhythm on the Ride, I really like the Pad sound at the end though
What you think of this one
Soundcloud
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Mar 06, 2010 10:21 am
by Max4Beats
Welcome
Cool Rhythms to start with, i like those wistley Cird like noises, Very tribal Jah Feel to it!
Need to toughen up that Bass Drum...
Pure Chilling song, Not what I was expecting
Wobble is bang on! Perfect
Love how its constantly changing
Breakdown after 2.14 is really cool and needed!
Work on the structure a bit. over 5 mins for a song like this is really long, hard to keep the interest, but with a re structure it would be a really cool tune!