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truncated · Post by **truncated** » Tue May 05, 2009 5:13 pm

pk- wrote:http://www.pjpk.net/fucksake.mp3

never going to finish it

i think you should!

i like what you've started.

aftee · Post by **aftee** » Wed May 06, 2009 9:51 pm

Truncated wrote:
pk- wrote:http://www.pjpk.net/fucksake.mp3

never going to finish it
i think you should!

i like what you've started.

second that! sounds nice, very bouncy

connection · Post by **connection** » Thu May 07, 2009 12:21 pm

Critique needed please!

Started this a week ago and am liking the vibe. Not my usual style, kinda fell in to it. Bit more laid back/atmospheric.

Very rough mix and arrangement. About 2mins worth so far.

Thanks!

http://www.zshare.net/audio/59701288e50e83fa/

pk- · Post by **pk-** » Sat May 09, 2009 3:13 pm

Aftee wrote:
Truncated wrote:
pk- wrote:http://www.pjpk.net/fucksake.mp3

never going to finish it
i think you should!

i like what you've started.
second that! sounds nice, very bouncy

http://www.pjpk.net/fucksake.mp3

probably should've just left it alone

fuzz_2k · Post by **fuzz_2k** » Sun May 10, 2009 1:38 am

pk- wrote:
Aftee wrote:
Truncated wrote:
pk- wrote:http://www.pjpk.net/fucksake.mp3

never going to finish it
i think you should!

i like what you've started.
second that! sounds nice, very bouncy
http://www.pjpk.net/fucksake.mp3

probably should've just left it alone

mate its done

just mix it down

resktwo · Post by **resktwo** » Mon May 11, 2009 12:20 am

pk- wrote:
Aftee wrote:
Truncated wrote:
pk- wrote:http://www.pjpk.net/fucksake.mp3

never going to finish it
i think you should!

i like what you've started.
second that! sounds nice, very bouncy
http://www.pjpk.net/fucksake.mp3

probably should've just left it alone

that's great! sound finished to me..

http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=8be0 ... 6e282a0ee8

something i started few hours ago, would appreciate some tips or feedbacks,
also if anyone wanna give me some feedbacks on my 2 new tunes on the myspace that'd be great (monks on crack\here's johnny)

glottis5 · Post by **glottis5** » Mon May 11, 2009 8:38 am

pk- wrote:http://www.pjpk.net/fucksake.mp3

never going to finish it

this is awesome

lowpass · Post by **lowpass** » Mon May 11, 2009 9:42 am

@ Resktwo - Is that a vengeance kick? sounds cool the whole track is sounding pretty atmospheric I like it, I think the arpeggio thing should be a little higher in the mix, what did you use for the bass if you don't mind me asking it sounds really good.

@ PK - yeah I agree with the mix down I'm not even running my monitors with a sub and my rooms shaking, nice work

@ Connection - This is sounding pretty dark, the vocals seem fitting, melodic at the same time I like it

This is the newest update of my track, its got some good feedback so far but I want to know where to take it from here. Not really done this sorta style before: -

http://www.zshare.net/audio/59865589a7e1e522/

resktwo · Post by **resktwo** » Mon May 11, 2009 11:32 am

not a vengence kick, thanks man

hmm the bass in this one is albino , in some points with a lot of bit crushing or filtering

viralcode · Post by **viralcode** » Mon May 11, 2009 4:20 pm

@ Lowpass - The track starts great, but there is something just not right about that bass. It doesn't seem to flow right..
Everything else sounds tight; I love the use of reverb and choice of sounds/samples.....
Yet i feel the track doesn't lead anywhere, it just seems to repeat itself... You should change the sub bass or add something new after one of the break downs, like a new melody working over the piano... something which really picks the track up.

This is my attempt...

unmixed/unfinished...

H E A V Y.

Radio Wavs
http://rapidshare.com/files/229620193/Radio_Wavs.mp3

any feedback would be tight

kapital · Post by **kapital** » Mon May 11, 2009 5:29 pm

beeliner wrote:ez guys my first attempt @ my work in progress

slate it! like it! love it! hate it!

made using ableton live 7.3

here it is "base" by beeliner

http://soundcloud.com/beeline-b/c-users ... eliner-bee

ez

this tune is dope. Two things I noticed.

1. The drums get lost a bit under the synth. Could be brough up a lil more.

2. The way the build up was going I was expecting some serious sub sub sub sub-a-sub. Especially with the gunfiya that was getting let off. Sub-a-sub would be nice, ya know?

But I felt it otherwise. Props.

knobgoblin · Post by **knobgoblin** » Mon May 11, 2009 10:36 pm

New thing I'm working on:
http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/518773/01%20 ... 0Ghost.mp3

Kinda a cross between industrial and dubstep.
Still needs and ending, but im pretty happy with the sounds. Also could probably use some more arrangement work and more drum variations.

Any ideas on ways to end it?

viralcode · Post by **viralcode** » Mon May 11, 2009 10:46 pm

KnobGoblin wrote:New thing I'm working on:
http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/518773/01%20 ... 0Ghost.mp3

Kinda a cross between industrial and dubstep.
Still needs and ending, but im pretty happy with the sounds. Also could probably use some more arrangement work and more drum variations.

Any ideas on ways to end it?

stinky dirty... loving it....

fuzz_2k · Post by **fuzz_2k** » Tue May 12, 2009 1:30 am

viralcode wrote:This is my attempt...

unmixed/unfinished...

H E A V Y.

Radio Wavs
http://rapidshare.com/files/229620193/Radio_Wavs.mp3

any feedback would be tight

sub bass is very tight in this!! tune sounds good as a whole

would blatantly make the dance bounce!!
would like to hear the finished product...

@ knobGoblin a little abrasive for my ears but has good flow!
feelin the flute thing (or what eva it is) you got goin on

@ lowpass - agree with viralcode, nicely done but just needs that lead noise on top, everyting else is very well done. sub is all good.

any feedback on my tune welcome

whats it need?!?!

first on the myspace playa

viralcode · Post by **viralcode** » Tue May 12, 2009 10:27 am

@fuzz_2k

this is really nice man.... it flows really well, you should have a clean break down with only the lead melody or something and no drums to keep the listener interested etc..

what do you produce with?

fuzz_2k · Post by **fuzz_2k** » Tue May 12, 2009 10:34 am

viralcode wrote:@fuzz_2k

this is really nice man.... it flows really well, you should have a clean break down with only the lead melody or something and no drums to keep the listener interested etc..

what do you produce with?

good plan

on it

my daw is cubase sx3, most of the lead noise's from massive. think the sax came from orchestral

viralcode · Post by **viralcode** » Tue May 12, 2009 12:24 pm

KnobGoblin wrote:New thing I'm working on:
http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/518773/01%20 ... 0Ghost.mp3

Kinda a cross between industrial and dubstep.
Still needs and ending, but im pretty happy with the sounds. Also could probably use some more arrangement work and more drum variations.

Any ideas on ways to end it?

this is fucking heavy!!!! loving the industrial feel. You should end it with all of the sounds fading out and just finish with the flute and high hats/closed hats...

gibz · Post by **gibz** » Tue May 12, 2009 12:37 pm

http://www.zshare.net/audio/599154382d228567/

Should I finish it?

kapital · Post by **kapital** » Tue May 12, 2009 2:18 pm

Gibz wrote:http://www.zshare.net/audio/599154382d228567/

Should I finish it?

Based on the minute I heard...yes you should finish it. I'm feeling the drums in that one. I like the minimal feel to it as well...would like to hear what else you were thinking of doing with that beat.

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