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				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for DECEMBER, 2010
				Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 2:55 am
				by nylle
				definitely do something with that first wobble 
doesnt sit right with me..
			 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for DECEMBER, 2010
				Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 3:03 am
				by brex
				heres my current wip
ive been working on some different styles than what i usually do so i'm interested to know what you think  
 
any kind of criticism is appreciated
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				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for DECEMBER, 2010
				Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 3:11 am
				by breakmonster
				OH SNAP that Jakwob track is FIRE FI REALLLL!!
Thanks for the feedback i'mma adjust that bass when i get back to my monitors.. 

 
			 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for DECEMBER, 2010
				Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 3:44 am
				by sqwuabblesmynig
				shit i never get feedback haha :/ if anyone could help me out its greatly appreciated!
			 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for DECEMBER, 2010
				Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 4:09 am
				by nylle
				yea i listened to your tracks last night but i accidentally a whole bottle of kraken  

  forgot to reply to them
sqwuabblesmynig wrote:
looking for some feedback on this crap, been producing what i want to be considered dubstep lol about 2 months now, dont really like anything, my basslines need some serious structure work, any feedback.tips are much appreciated! thanks all!
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those sound effects are programmed in at really cool parts. ive heard basslines like that before. only thing i would do is maybe play around with different notes. that vocal sample could be a bit louder too 
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this track is dirty. i would try and break up the beat between your samples occasionally, give it emphasis for that half bar that it plays or w/e. cool tracks tho ima start following
 
			 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for DECEMBER, 2010
				Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 5:53 am
				by nylle
				brex wrote:heres my current wip
ive been working on some different styles than what i usually do so i'm interested to know what you think  
 
any kind of criticism is appreciated
Soundcloud 
dude i love the way you broke it up after the drop that was pretty sick
i'd make that synth that echoes before the intro a little bit louder..
 
			 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for DECEMBER, 2010
				Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 5:54 am
				by sqwuabblesmynig
				nylle wrote:yea i listened to your tracks last night but i accidentally a whole bottle of kraken  

  forgot to reply to them
sqwuabblesmynig wrote:
looking for some feedback on this crap, been producing what i want to be considered dubstep lol about 2 months now, dont really like anything, my basslines need some serious structure work, any feedback.tips are much appreciated! thanks all!
Soundcloud
those sound effects are programmed in at really cool parts. ive heard basslines like that before. only thing i would do is maybe play around with different notes. that vocal sample could be a bit louder too 
Soundcloud 
this track is dirty. i would try and break up the beat between your samples occasionally, give it emphasis for that half bar that it plays or w/e. cool tracks tho ima start following
 
cheers man, same to you  

 
			 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for DECEMBER, 2010
				Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 6:39 am
				by Grime Syndicate
				nylle wrote:Grime Syndicate wrote:You could DEFINITELY come up with a decent damn near ANYTHING in reason. Ever heard The Widdler? Reason all day
i definitely feel like i can make damn near anything in reason  
 
and yea i kno the widdler. got into dubstep thru some of his tracks. especially his bootlegs 
also that track in your sig is SICK
 
Right the fuck on... I'm trying to finish that one up so I can get it to AfterEmpire for the compilation release.
Appreciate the love though, for real. gonna go ahead and give your shit a listen after i eat.
 
			 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for DECEMBER, 2010
				Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 6:47 am
				by nylle
				Grime Syndicate wrote:nylle wrote:Grime Syndicate wrote:You could DEFINITELY come up with a decent damn near ANYTHING in reason. Ever heard The Widdler? Reason all day
i definitely feel like i can make damn near anything in reason  
 
and yea i kno the widdler. got into dubstep thru some of his tracks. especially his bootlegs 
also that track in your sig is SICK
 
Right the fuck on... I'm trying to finish that one up so I can get it to AfterEmpire for the compilation release.
Appreciate the love though, for real. gonna go ahead and give your shit a listen after i eat.
 
yesssssss dude you got a really unique sound 
dark as fuck too
im aabout to ditch that winter track actually it's just pissing me off now and id rather make somethin else  

 
			 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for DECEMBER, 2010
				Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 6:50 am
				by Grime Syndicate
				Ok. But come back later with fresh ears and new tricks up your sleeve. Always helps my creativity to start a new track. Sometimes you come back, most times you don't, but either way, I figure the best thing is to always be writing.
			 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for DECEMBER, 2010
				Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 9:56 am
				by sprayyypaint
				nylle-this sounds so pro man! the snapping fingers give it something organic. the bass is smooth yet dirrrtttyyyyyyy. amazing sounds i like it a lot i cant think of anything i dont like about it. EDIT:sorry i was stoned yesterday while writing. here is something more constructive. i think the beginning is a little  long im waiting for something else to happen but it never does?? other than that i keep my statement above!
breakmonster -its a little repetetive maybe? the wooshes are a little loud. sounds like you need to mess with the levels a little. overall it sounds like you got your own flava. good shit 
 
RAVE-i do not normally listen to music like this, but it doesnt sound like you have any bass going. but my speakers are low because its late so i dunno ~.~
        sounds like some rave music tho! haha
heres mine,
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				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for DECEMBER, 2010
				Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 12:18 pm
				by sirminus
				nylle wrote:Grime Syndicate wrote:nylle wrote:Grime Syndicate wrote:You could DEFINITELY come up with a decent damn near ANYTHING in reason. Ever heard The Widdler? Reason all day
i definitely feel like i can make damn near anything in reason  
 
and yea i kno the widdler. got into dubstep thru some of his tracks. especially his bootlegs 
also that track in your sig is SICK
 
Right the fuck on... I'm trying to finish that one up so I can get it to AfterEmpire for the compilation release.
Appreciate the love though, for real. gonna go ahead and give your shit a listen after i eat.
 
yesssssss dude you got a really unique sound 
dark as fuck too
im aabout to ditch that winter track actually it's just pissing me off now and id rather make somethin else  

 
any of you reason heads down for a callabo?  Id be interested in how everyone sets up their racks (/nh)
 
			 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for DECEMBER, 2010
				Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 4:27 pm
				by dougriley
				@brex: you def know what you're doing...  i actually like how you use the silence before the drop, way more intense!  my only suggestion is to maybe turn up the kick a little...  other than that, i can't wait to see what you do with the rest of the track, maybe a crazy b section?
@sprayyypaint: STRUCTURE!   
 
as for this new track i'm working on...  i have hit a brick wall, any advice would be of great help...  i just don't know where to go with the track.  the drum pattern is pretty generic right now and the drop is almost non-existent - once i figure out whether completion of the track is justified i'll be putting some time into these sections
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				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for DECEMBER, 2010
				Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 4:44 pm
				by YellowMan
				First track that I've done, kinda rough but would like to hear any comments to get an idea of where i am with it
Cheers 
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				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for DECEMBER, 2010
				Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 8:06 pm
				by thefrim
				heres how my track posted a couple days back is going
no more smokey and the bandit sample  
 
EDIT: btw sorry for rinsing the brostep sound  
 
my new shit will prob be more og dubsteplike
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				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for DECEMBER, 2010
				Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 8:20 pm
				by Grime Syndicate
				sirminus wrote:nylle wrote:Grime Syndicate wrote:nylle wrote:Grime Syndicate wrote:You could DEFINITELY come up with a decent damn near ANYTHING in reason. Ever heard The Widdler? Reason all day
i definitely feel like i can make damn near anything in reason  
 
and yea i kno the widdler. got into dubstep thru some of his tracks. especially his bootlegs 
also that track in your sig is SICK
 
Right the fuck on... I'm trying to finish that one up so I can get it to AfterEmpire for the compilation release.
Appreciate the love though, for real. gonna go ahead and give your shit a listen after i eat.
 
yesssssss dude you got a really unique sound 
dark as fuck too
im aabout to ditch that winter track actually it's just pissing me off now and id rather make somethin else  

 
any of you reason heads down for a callabo?  Id be interested in how everyone sets up their racks (/nh)
 
Oh, I'm an Ableton man myself. i just believe in Reason, if it's what you've got at your disposal....
 
			 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for DECEMBER, 2010
				Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 10:00 pm
				by Protea
				Hey, my first track posted on here.  Appreciate some feedback.
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Thanks 

 
			 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for DECEMBER, 2010
				Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 10:11 pm
				by nnny
				@Protea some cool stuff you got going on there, some nice effects, nice bass towards the end there, love it. Wasn't so keen on it at the start, but started getting in to it as it picked up!
@sirminus Feeling your track man! Sick! I just feel as if the build up took too long, although I can't say much, my track just sounds like one long intro xD
@breakmonster Yeah, like said, play about adjusting the levels, and try and vary it up a little. It is a little repetitive, but otherwise nice
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Mine:
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				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for DECEMBER, 2010
				Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 10:23 pm
				by nylle
				
ooh totally diggin the atmosphere in this. 
the snare/clap sounds really wide and should be a little more mid-to-high range imo.  would probably try changing the notes that piano plays occasionally too since that piano is pretty nice soundin'.
 
			 
			
					
				Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for DECEMBER, 2010
				Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 11:02 pm
				by Grime Syndicate
				thefrim wrote:heres how my track posted a couple days back is going
no more smokey and the bandit sample  
 
EDIT: btw sorry for rinsing the brostep sound  
 
my new shit will prob be more og dubsteplike
Soundcloud 
I'm not gonna tell you what to do, but I myself would never apologize for my tastes/expression. If others don't like it, FUCK EM. If you don't like it, change it.