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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 3:38 pm
by nruen
Updated version from earlier. Changes come in at 3.11.

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 3:44 pm
by JBE
Here's something I just started working on yesterday. It's chillout/downtempo with dubstep elements but I don't think it could be classified specifically as dubstep. Id say it's much more chillout than anything else.

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 5:15 pm
by redjuan
yo folks,another bit ive worked on with a friend yesterday,loving the drop in it but we hit a brickwall late in the evening so would just like peoples feedback on the tune etc. shall leave feedback to anyone who comments after i have my sunday dinner.thanks,look forward to hearing wat u's think, link below.Juan

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 6:08 pm
by a.paul
@mashmash
@nruen

thanks for the feedback! feeling your tracks as well.

@nruen ive been trying to soften those hats :( im using logic. having no luck at all :(
any suggestions?

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 6:11 pm
by tripwire22
a.paul wrote:@mashmash
@nruen

thanks for the feedback! feeling your tracks as well.

@nruen ive been trying to soften those hats :( im using logic. having no luck at all :(
any suggestions?
try reverb? slight delay?

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 6:14 pm
by tripwire22
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another autonomic 170 attempt

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 6:18 pm
by nruen
a.paul wrote:@mashmash
@nruen

thanks for the feedback! feeling your tracks as well.

@nruen ive been trying to soften those hats :( im using logic. having no luck at all :(
any suggestions?
Well for a start you could just try turning them down a tad and then cut the very higher end frequencies. A little dab of light reverb with a short decay or a quick, snappy delay would help a lot.

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 6:20 pm
by a.paul
@nruen
@tripwire22

thanks, ill try it now.

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 7:31 pm
by charliefoy
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Be happy with at least one bit of feedback :(
ill return!

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 7:47 pm
by a.paul
charliefoy wrote:Soundcloud
Be happy with at least one bit of feedback :(
ill return!
i like the idea of the tune, i think you need to turn the drums up a bit though and maybe move around some kicks to keep everything flowing well!
digging it though, cant wait to hear more progress!

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 9:31 pm
by nruen
@charliefoy
I'd say the only weakness to that is the kicks. Placement is a bit klunky. Also after 2.15 it gets a bit generic.

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 9:43 pm
by Bledbox
Just started this
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Also...its May...

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 9:49 pm
by a.paul
old tune, reworking it a bit.
feedback:)

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 9:50 pm
by goldorak
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New tune

Still unfinished buy I'd like to know your opinion :)

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 2:37 am
by trox
charliefoy wrote:
trox wrote:bump

trox wrote: Soundcloud
would love some feedback =D
Really really good :) Only thing is, the kick drum could be abit bit punchier, but thats just me :)

Thanks mate! I'll look into my drum layering and compression see what I can do. =D

Much appreciated.

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 9:12 am
by charliefoy
a.paul wrote:
charliefoy wrote:Soundcloud
Be happy with at least one bit of feedback :(
ill return!
i like the idea of the tune, i think you need to turn the drums up a bit though and maybe move around some kicks to keep everything flowing well!
digging it though, cant wait to hear more progress!
Alright cheers :) I'll work on it today, probably gonna scrap the other half of the track and get rid of that wobble.
Im mixing on passive's so if anythings off thats why!

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 9:14 am
by charliefoy
nruen wrote:@charliefoy
I'd say the only weakness to that is the kicks. Placement is a bit klunky. Also after 2.15 it gets a bit generic.
Cheers ill work on that :) yeah i might keep the wobble but make it a little more subtle and add some reverb to it. And maybe another pad type synth to fill in the gaps.
Would you suggest using less kicks?

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 9:27 am
by nruen
charliefoy wrote:
nruen wrote:@charliefoy
I'd say the only weakness to that is the kicks. Placement is a bit klunky. Also after 2.15 it gets a bit generic.
Cheers ill work on that :) yeah i might keep the wobble but make it a little more subtle and add some reverb to it. And maybe another pad type synth to fill in the gaps.
Would you suggest using less kicks?
Yeah I always find that kicks should be used to propel the track and keep it going. Maybe change the kick on the 3rd beat to a clap or something. This is more down to personal opinion though.

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 11:13 am
by charliefoy
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Updated. Took out some of the synths and played around with the kicks a bit :)
Let me know what you think!

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

Posted: Tue May 04, 2010 7:11 pm
by The Phantom Banger
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will feedback lotsa tracks tommoorw, too much coursework tonight