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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 3:38 pm
by nruen
Updated version from earlier. Changes come in at 3.11.
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 3:44 pm
by JBE
Here's something I just started working on yesterday. It's chillout/downtempo with dubstep elements but I don't think it could be classified specifically as dubstep. Id say it's much more chillout than anything else.
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 5:15 pm
by redjuan
yo folks,another bit ive worked on with a friend yesterday,loving the drop in it but we hit a brickwall late in the evening so would just like peoples feedback on the tune etc. shall leave feedback to anyone who comments after i have my sunday dinner.thanks,look forward to hearing wat u's think, link below.Juan
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 6:08 pm
by a.paul
@mashmash
@nruen
thanks for the feedback! feeling your tracks as well.
@nruen ive been trying to soften those hats

im using logic. having no luck at all

any suggestions?
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 6:11 pm
by tripwire22
a.paul wrote:@mashmash
@nruen
thanks for the feedback! feeling your tracks as well.
@nruen ive been trying to soften those hats

im using logic. having no luck at all

any suggestions?
try reverb? slight delay?
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 6:14 pm
by tripwire22
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another autonomic 170 attempt
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 6:18 pm
by nruen
a.paul wrote:@mashmash
@nruen
thanks for the feedback! feeling your tracks as well.
@nruen ive been trying to soften those hats

im using logic. having no luck at all

any suggestions?
Well for a start you could just try turning them down a tad and then cut the very higher end frequencies. A little dab of light reverb with a short decay or a quick, snappy delay would help a lot.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 6:20 pm
by a.paul
@nruen
@tripwire22
thanks, ill try it now.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 7:31 pm
by charliefoy
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Be happy with at least one bit of feedback

ill return!
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 7:47 pm
by a.paul
charliefoy wrote:Soundcloud
Be happy with at least one bit of feedback

ill return!
i like the idea of the tune, i think you need to turn the drums up a bit though and maybe move around some kicks to keep everything flowing well!
digging it though, cant wait to hear more progress!
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 9:31 pm
by nruen
@charliefoy
I'd say the only weakness to that is the kicks. Placement is a bit klunky. Also after 2.15 it gets a bit generic.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 9:43 pm
by Bledbox
Just started this
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Also...its May...
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 9:49 pm
by a.paul
old tune, reworking it a bit.
feedback:)
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 9:50 pm
by goldorak
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New tune
Still unfinished buy I'd like to know your opinion

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 2:37 am
by trox
charliefoy wrote:trox wrote:bump
would love some feedback =D
Really really good

Only thing is, the kick drum could be abit bit punchier, but thats just me

Thanks mate! I'll look into my drum layering and compression see what I can do. =D
Much appreciated.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 9:12 am
by charliefoy
a.paul wrote:charliefoy wrote:Soundcloud
Be happy with at least one bit of feedback

ill return!
i like the idea of the tune, i think you need to turn the drums up a bit though and maybe move around some kicks to keep everything flowing well!
digging it though, cant wait to hear more progress!
Alright cheers

I'll work on it today, probably gonna scrap the other half of the track and get rid of that wobble.
Im mixing on passive's so if anythings off thats why!
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 9:14 am
by charliefoy
nruen wrote:@charliefoy
I'd say the only weakness to that is the kicks. Placement is a bit klunky. Also after 2.15 it gets a bit generic.
Cheers ill work on that

yeah i might keep the wobble but make it a little more subtle and add some reverb to it. And maybe another pad type synth to fill in the gaps.
Would you suggest using less kicks?
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 9:27 am
by nruen
charliefoy wrote:nruen wrote:@charliefoy
I'd say the only weakness to that is the kicks. Placement is a bit klunky. Also after 2.15 it gets a bit generic.
Cheers ill work on that

yeah i might keep the wobble but make it a little more subtle and add some reverb to it. And maybe another pad type synth to fill in the gaps.
Would you suggest using less kicks?
Yeah I always find that kicks should be used to propel the track and keep it going. Maybe change the kick on the 3rd beat to a clap or something. This is more down to personal opinion though.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 11:13 am
by charliefoy
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Updated. Took out some of the synths and played around with the kicks a bit

Let me know what you think!
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010
Posted: Tue May 04, 2010 7:11 pm
by The Phantom Banger
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will feedback lotsa tracks tommoorw, too much coursework tonight