So I only got feedback from 2 people even though I gave a load to others, so I figured I'd post some more for people in an attempt to receive some more
@dougriley: Nice dark intro and a good use of samples. Your main bass is nice too. Not really sure to suggest for this, the only thing for me is it sounds a little empty - I know it's a deeper style track but perhaps a sort of ghostly piano lead may sound good as a progression towards the end of the track?
@Paradoxx: Yeah the intro isn't great
If I'm honest the drums are uninspiring, try and liven them up a little with some more hits and panned hats, maybe play about with some tom fills too. You have nice variation, but the basses and synths need glueing together better to improve the whole overall feel - try bussing them together with the sub and maybe applying a saturator and/or comp.
@4rantare: Track's unavailable?
@Udyret: An improvement for sure, not really sure what to suggest- perhaps try and work on bringing out the drums and lead melody.
@The Other Drug: Intro sounds like a hardstye track
Love the samples aside from the siren - that gets annoying quickly. Bass sounds good albeit slighty over distorted, perhaps to add further variation you could mess with stereo width of the mid region of your bass. I like the tempo switches and the drums sound fairly clean. Quite a cool track man.
@VirusTI: I still standby what I said before about the reversed perc on the intro and the kick/snare - they need work. The drums really need livening up to get the track pumping - even consider sidechaining your synths. At 1.45 the synth sounds distorted - not sure if thats intentional? Try and get your synths sounding cleaner and mix the drums better as I mentioned to get it sounding tight.
@Burgeamon: I like the original of this track, so it's hard to for me to contrast your remix however the drop was surprisingly good - like the KTN "ahh" sample you've used too. Really nice production man, I'd genuinely suggest sending it to KP via Twitter or something - they're notorious for playing good fanmade remixes in their sets.
@BudSpencertron: Definately sounds cleaner - still think you should consider some more perc hits like toms/bongos and panned hats. Good job though.
@Clodmeister: I wasnt going to comment on your track since you gave no feedback, but then I listened to it, not wanting to sound like a dick but your lead synth and melody is genuinely fucking annoying to listen to, I just don't like it at all, just personal preference I suppose.
@Tad: Nice and clean intro - sounds good. Nice drop too - I like the droney bass a lot, however it needs more sub frequnecies (perhaps even slightly saturated triangle based sub). Not much to suggest really as all the elements sound good, finish this track up!
@npcompl33t: Nice into, the synth and drums sound full and clean, good buildup too. Love the Glados samples
Since this is electro house, I would suggest at some points chopping in an ultra heavy saw synth that isn't as stereo spread as the saw bass you're using and cutting the lead synth at those points. Also you need to work on your kick, snare and hats - the kick gets lost, sidechain it. The snare/clap needs more snap - bring out the top end. You need more hats to make the percussion swing, perhaps use two slightly panned apart on alternate hits. Good effort though, it's got solid potential
Sinestepper: Those drum hits on the intro are nice, really nice - the whoe perc on the intro is spot on. Although after the drop the "clangy" drum gets slightly repetitive and annoying, perhaps every few hits use the same sample but down pitched to add variation? Nice job though.
My track again, hoping for some more feedback
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Such an energetic tune though! 
