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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 7:13 am
by sammyscribbles
streetxlite wrote:@sammyscribbles
i love the ambient trip hop vibes on your first track. i fell right into this one for a few minutes and had to come out from the hypnotic beats afterwards
@ streetxlite

Thanks, that was one of the tracks main purposes when i was making so feedback is much appreciated there.

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 12:48 pm
by Nacklewicket
baaan wrote: Soundcloud
this track is. AWESOME!
only thing that came to mind tho was the snare cud be a lil bit louder
and it sounds unfinished? i think it needs a part where everything comes together and everything just goes on in one flow... i dont really know how to explain what i mean but needs a part where everything is going on at the same time where all things happen in a constant flow like a closure
but the sound of it you got going is really just, awesome, really liking this :D

heres the latest track ive been working on:
Soundcloud

cheers :)

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 12:56 pm
by bifta

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 12:57 pm
by samkablaam
@ hakka - cool, that lead lacks something low mid. needs a bit more presence. good mixwise

@kontigo - love it. maybe a crisper snare. and squashed a bit more, but love it.

@sammyscribbles and bifta - comment someone elses first

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 4:28 pm
by jakerobert
@Baaan - really dig the track, but the lead i find a little grating. could be just taste but maybe you could try smoothing it out a little? the sub is killer though. Also I feel that this track could use maybe another layer or two - its got a solid structure but you've got room to give it some more hooks or ornamentation.

@nacklewicket - drums sound tight and punchy - i like them a lot, especially the break! :D on a whole i think this track has a very unique sound. I want to hear more of your stuff! also late morning is the perfect title for this track, really fits it

@kontingobeats - I'm liking the shuffley beat and the cut up vox quite a bit. for me the pads get a little repetitive but maybe thats what you were going for.

heres mine then, not sure what but I feel like it still needs something...

Soundcloud

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 5:06 pm
by Nacklewicket
jakerobert - thanks :) sadly the drums are just the amen brother break eq'd/compressed and edited abit but i think it fits. im experimenting around alot so i havent really got up to "my own style" yet. but thanks really appreciated! :) try listening to "The Freezing Gaze" which is on my soundcloud also, its abit more in the frames of "dubstep" tho it's more minimal and bassy :)

i listened to your track :D i like it alot, what came to mind was late nights with emulators, playing sonic, earthworm jim, jazz jackrabbit and classic games like that :D it has a really "cartoony" feeling all over it :) however theres something going on with the soundlevels going up and down but i assume you did that on purpose cus it sounds good :)
other than that, the beat is really catchy! the high pitched synth i like, but the sound of it could use some work, im always having a hard time explaining stuff about music but, id try make it more ... 'sharp', try messing around abit with the eq on it maybe just a tad little bit of reverb? its a cool tune tho :) im keen to hear the full finished version!

edit: i just realized i look like a fkn douche using that many smilies :P

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Thu Jun 03, 2010 6:18 am
by Psythe
@nacklewicket Digin the house/ambience this track has good mellow sub nice.
@samkablam love this begining it just makes you feel really good inside like a chillin day with no worries nice man.
@baan i think you and nackle should tag a track together it seems you both have good vibes when it comes to laying down track
ok heres a track im workin on not close to finished yet i need to make it tighter and that second drop will be fixed for sure but just lemme know what you think thanksSoundcloud