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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Wed May 05, 2010 4:43 pm
by JBE
Sorry for not posting any feedback earlier. I ended up getting really sick the other day and I've barely been able to get out of bed let alone sit at a computer for more than 2 minutes. Today I finally felt good enough to get out of bed and do some stuff before I went back to sleep so I can work tonight.

@Bledbox: I was really liking that. I think it could definitely use some more bass though.

@mmplisskin: I really didn't like the kick. I think you go the right idea you just need to go bigger with your beat samples. Could use some more subbass to.

@Tripwire22: I was digging it. It sounded very tribal in a way.

@Weedcali: I was really liking the chilled out vibe of the song. I thought the beat fit perfectly with rhythm of the bass and synths.

@Haack: Very nice. Love the dark vibe the song gives off. I was really digging those wobble spikes.

@Nruen: Off the hook man. Loved it. I loved how you changed up the beat in the second part to, gave it a really nice sound.

@redjuan: I don't really see what else you could really do in this. With just what you have there you got a really nice vibe. It's got that nice classic dark dubstep sound. It's not like you need the song to be 5 minutes long. I bet if you just found a way to increase the length of a few parts just to give the listener something to groove to for a little bit it would be great. Even if its only like 2:30 long. Maybe bring in a few new samples in the beat to change it up a bit, but don't mess with the vibe from the synths cause they sound really good together.

@Beatdemo: Thanks for the feedback. That's kinda what I was going for. It wasn't meant to be a banger or anything, I just wanted something you could relax and listen to. As for your track. I never was one for that particular style but I understand what it is that draws people to it, and for that you've done a great job. There's nice variety in the track to keep you interested without losing the actual groove of the track itself. Might just be me but I actually felt that the kick was weaker than the actual song dictated it should be.

Well that's about all I can muster for today. That's pretty much stuff from page 1 I think. I'll try to get to some more tommorrow depending on how I'm feeling.

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Wed May 05, 2010 4:49 pm
by globalbabylon
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Feedback appreciated
Dubious

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Wed May 05, 2010 4:49 pm
by lp
Thanks for the feedback people, @graftek there must be something to critize in the tune :mrgreen:

@graftek - Flow of the track is working mate, makes me wanna swivel in my chair! Loving the stabby lead adds nice movment to the groove but I think its calling for some more automation. Latly a few edits to break up the flow would work well.

@kongtigobeats - Real good work, different to a lot of things I've been hearing recently. Didn't ever feel like I wanted to skip through any of it which is always a good sign and the melody and fx have been engineered well into the track. The distorted synth layer that comes in over the main synth/pad I feel is a little bit too much but this could be how you like it, maybe a bit of eqing may be neccessary or just turnin it down in the mix. Oh and before I forget the percussion is too quiet but like I said very cool stuff.

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Wed May 05, 2010 4:55 pm
by charliefoy
graftek wrote:@Charliefoy
Hehe I find these things kinda difficult say. Since I don't want to influence your track to much. There are a few things you could try tho. Try and find some short sounds. So you can add a bit more viaration and got some more input for playing around with the dealy and reverb (in general I think your snare could use a bit more reverb). Try to come up with some alternative hi-hat patterns (maybe even add diffrent ones). Shuffle them around and see what happens. Experiment with pads. Stuff like this. :)
Cheers man ill have a go :)

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 3:08 am
by ENZA
feedbackk??? VVVV

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 4:10 am
by WAG
Soundcloud

I think I have a potential monster on my hands with this... The breakdown at the end is my favorite part and it was sort of an accident. Kinda rippin on the metalcore thing haha. :lol:
EDIT: UPDATED! Remastered a little bit. Added some samples, extended some parts.

Gonna start blasting through this May thread giving out opinions before it gets too huge.

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 4:17 am
by tripwire22
@LP veeeerrryy deep my friend this is a tune nothing bad can be said about this

@graftik i like where uve started but def needs some variations in the loop but i like ur chosen sounds so far

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 4:37 am
by tripwire22
Soundcloud

brand new idk how to feel about it since i made it so fast

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 9:00 am
by IntrudaB2BAngel
New to the Game.... Not Marstered yet still demo... so..... Here it is ....
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Please Let Us Know !!

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 9:00 am
by IntrudaB2BAngel
New to the Game.... Not Marstered yet still demo... so..... Here it is ....
Soundcloud

Please Let Us Know !!

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 11:27 am
by IntrudaB2BAngel
Feedback For Tracks


@goldorak- Ok Good flow , but theres no peaks or any other movement through the tune.
However i like the way you have composed the beat as it goes through.


@redjuan- Track 1) Very slow to get peaking, unusual flows in this one. Be intrested to see the finished result :)
Track 2) ADD BASELINES! If your going for a dubstep feel anyway... But the foundation of the track is good.

@tagme- Boppin beat wicked effects, nice drops :D Alot of potential this track :D


Good Stuff People :P

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 1:06 pm
by ironik
@wag: liking your tune quite alot let me know when its finished, strictly banger only though haha not for chillin :lol: .
@dubious: your bass is so clean, your tunes something to study to haha gets me mellow as. i like :D

this is my tune it hasnt been mastered at all and its obv not finished :)
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feedback appreciated thanks.

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 1:33 pm
by jaspervc
Would love some more feedback ;) Thanks..
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 1:34 pm
by IntrudaB2BAngel
GIVE FEEDBACK TO RECIVE FEEDBACK !!!!

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 1:35 pm
by tripwire22
IntrudaB2BAngel wrote:GIVE FEEDBACK TO RECIVE FEEDBACK !!!!
u get my message cuz dsf was down

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 1:38 pm
by IntrudaB2BAngel
tripwire22 wrote:
IntrudaB2BAngel wrote:GIVE FEEDBACK TO RECIVE FEEDBACK !!!!
u get my message cuz dsf was down


Yeah it sound very speedy at the begining.. i would suggest slowinging it down maybe then drop to original speed?

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 1:40 pm
by IntrudaB2BAngel
PLUS PLUS PLUS.... the beat in the begining give you the impresion of something different than the end result bless

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 1:43 pm
by tripwire22
IntrudaB2BAngel wrote:PLUS PLUS PLUS.... the beat in the begining give you the impresion of something different than the end result bless
for what song?

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 1:46 pm
by IntrudaB2BAngel
tripwire22 wrote:
IntrudaB2BAngel wrote:PLUS PLUS PLUS.... the beat in the begining give you the impresion of something different than the end result bless
for what song?


This one here my freind.

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 1:53 pm
by Craggle
Not sure if i posted on this fourm or the other, but none the less , this is no where being done just wanted so feedback, will post reviews of tracks after :)
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