Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Posted: Wed May 05, 2010 4:43 pm
Sorry for not posting any feedback earlier. I ended up getting really sick the other day and I've barely been able to get out of bed let alone sit at a computer for more than 2 minutes. Today I finally felt good enough to get out of bed and do some stuff before I went back to sleep so I can work tonight.
@Bledbox: I was really liking that. I think it could definitely use some more bass though.
@mmplisskin: I really didn't like the kick. I think you go the right idea you just need to go bigger with your beat samples. Could use some more subbass to.
@Tripwire22: I was digging it. It sounded very tribal in a way.
@Weedcali: I was really liking the chilled out vibe of the song. I thought the beat fit perfectly with rhythm of the bass and synths.
@Haack: Very nice. Love the dark vibe the song gives off. I was really digging those wobble spikes.
@Nruen: Off the hook man. Loved it. I loved how you changed up the beat in the second part to, gave it a really nice sound.
@redjuan: I don't really see what else you could really do in this. With just what you have there you got a really nice vibe. It's got that nice classic dark dubstep sound. It's not like you need the song to be 5 minutes long. I bet if you just found a way to increase the length of a few parts just to give the listener something to groove to for a little bit it would be great. Even if its only like 2:30 long. Maybe bring in a few new samples in the beat to change it up a bit, but don't mess with the vibe from the synths cause they sound really good together.
@Beatdemo: Thanks for the feedback. That's kinda what I was going for. It wasn't meant to be a banger or anything, I just wanted something you could relax and listen to. As for your track. I never was one for that particular style but I understand what it is that draws people to it, and for that you've done a great job. There's nice variety in the track to keep you interested without losing the actual groove of the track itself. Might just be me but I actually felt that the kick was weaker than the actual song dictated it should be.
Well that's about all I can muster for today. That's pretty much stuff from page 1 I think. I'll try to get to some more tommorrow depending on how I'm feeling.
@Bledbox: I was really liking that. I think it could definitely use some more bass though.
@mmplisskin: I really didn't like the kick. I think you go the right idea you just need to go bigger with your beat samples. Could use some more subbass to.
@Tripwire22: I was digging it. It sounded very tribal in a way.
@Weedcali: I was really liking the chilled out vibe of the song. I thought the beat fit perfectly with rhythm of the bass and synths.
@Haack: Very nice. Love the dark vibe the song gives off. I was really digging those wobble spikes.
@Nruen: Off the hook man. Loved it. I loved how you changed up the beat in the second part to, gave it a really nice sound.
@redjuan: I don't really see what else you could really do in this. With just what you have there you got a really nice vibe. It's got that nice classic dark dubstep sound. It's not like you need the song to be 5 minutes long. I bet if you just found a way to increase the length of a few parts just to give the listener something to groove to for a little bit it would be great. Even if its only like 2:30 long. Maybe bring in a few new samples in the beat to change it up a bit, but don't mess with the vibe from the synths cause they sound really good together.
@Beatdemo: Thanks for the feedback. That's kinda what I was going for. It wasn't meant to be a banger or anything, I just wanted something you could relax and listen to. As for your track. I never was one for that particular style but I understand what it is that draws people to it, and for that you've done a great job. There's nice variety in the track to keep you interested without losing the actual groove of the track itself. Might just be me but I actually felt that the kick was weaker than the actual song dictated it should be.
Well that's about all I can muster for today. That's pretty much stuff from page 1 I think. I'll try to get to some more tommorrow depending on how I'm feeling.