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benjimans · Post by **benjimans** » Sat Jun 13, 2009 2:18 pm

my first real attempt at a dubstep song... basically just an experiment and this is what has come out so far.
All criticism welcomed

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?tmzjqjye3qm

djake · Post by **djake** » Sat Jun 13, 2009 8:53 pm

started this a while back....

check my sig for links to soundcloud or myspace

track is called "unfinished clip"

LURQ · Post by **LURQ** » Sun Jun 14, 2009 10:47 am

My main concern is the swing/rhytim of the beat might be too rigid. Can anyone comment on it?

http://soundcloud.com/lurq/surround-2

Cheers.

dankaczmar · Post by **dankaczmar** » Sun Jun 14, 2009 11:50 am

two works in progress here, these are the only 2 dubstep tracks I've made so bear with me:)

Intergalactic-BeastieBoys(dK remix)

Wideboys and JLC-Girl Dem Shaker(dK dubmix)

suckabeat · Post by **suckabeat** » Sun Jun 14, 2009 12:27 pm

First post, but meh - I'd love some feedback on this:

http://soundcloud.com/suckabeat/isreal-josh-k

This isnt really aimed at the dancefloor, more deeper side of things...

btw download the 320k version...

djake · Post by **djake** » Sun Jun 14, 2009 2:15 pm

suckabeat wrote:First post, but meh - I'd love some feedback on this:

http://soundcloud.com/suckabeat/isreal-josh-k

This isnt really aimed at the dancefloor, more deeper side of things...

btw download the 320k version...

yea man i like that, really like that melody.

be nice if there was a breakdown half way through and then it changed up into somefing else.

but yea good job on that!

r · Post by r » Sun Jun 14, 2009 3:50 pm

R wrote:workin on this vibe.. Just dont know how to extend it. Any feedback or ideas ?

http://www.speedyshare.com/586140661.html

lequa · Post by **lequa** » Sun Jun 14, 2009 7:02 pm

http://www.zshare.net/audio/6136793946e17a21/

Say what you think my 3rd dubstep tune

Over and out from sweden wöpp

gorbek · Post by **gorbek** » Sun Jun 14, 2009 11:12 pm

R wrote:
R wrote:workin on this vibe.. Just dont know how to extend it. Any feedback or ideas ?

http://www.speedyshare.com/586140661.html

Man, I see what you mean, by extending it do you mean you want it to drop and kinda get a bit heavier?

First off, that sounds really promising, I like the vibe big time. Maybe you should try introducing a new drum kit and bassline after the 'ahHhHhHh' in the background? Kind of difficult to describe what I mean...

Don't give up on it though!

I Made this last night between 1am and 7am... my prime working hours...

I'd love some feedback, I feel like this track could be huge!

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?yottkyo1nbm

Thanks!

dignan · Post by **dignan** » Sun Jun 14, 2009 11:20 pm

suckabeat wrote:First post, but meh - I'd love some feedback on this:

http://soundcloud.com/suckabeat/isreal-josh-k

This isnt really aimed at the dancefloor, more deeper side of things...

btw download the 320k version...

I liked the wobble bass in your tune, but I think you could figure out some better ways to bring all the different synths in once the beat kicks in. try some fade in's / out's. also, try changing the beat up more. I kinda got bored with it after a while. overall a solid tune though...

dignan · Post by **dignan** » Sun Jun 14, 2009 11:22 pm

Gorbek wrote:
R wrote:
R wrote:workin on this vibe.. Just dont know how to extend it. Any feedback or ideas ?

http://www.speedyshare.com/586140661.html
Man, I see what you mean, by extending it do you mean you want it to drop and kinda get a bit heavier?

First off, that sounds really promising, I like the vibe big time. Maybe you should try introducing a new drum kit and bassline after the 'ahHhHhHh' in the background? Kind of difficult to describe what I mean...

Don't give up on it though!

I Made this last night between 1am and 7am... my prime working hours...

I'd love some feedback, I feel like this track could be huge!

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?yottkyo1nbm

Thanks!

Gorbek - LOVED your tune, man. after the "BOOM" sample then it kicked in - nice work!

dignan · Post by **dignan** » Mon Jun 15, 2009 2:31 am

www.myspace.com/blindprohet01 - just put up something I've been messing around with for the past day. it's called "Silly String Noose". please let me know what you think!

gorbek · Post by **gorbek** » Mon Jun 15, 2009 4:31 am

Dignan wrote:www.myspace.com/blindprohet01 - just put up something I've been messing around with for the past day. it's called "Silly String Noose". please let me know what you think!

Thanks Dignan, it's cool that you liked my boom track too, I thought I might be a bit crazy, gonna keep working on it.

You've got some nice laid back vibes going with silly noose.

Theres a echoey ding synth sound you have in there, and I feel like it might be out of time, it doesn't sound BAD, but I feel as if its off, you might have wanted that but I'm just letting you know it struck me when I listened.

Also, I feel like your snares are a bit harsh for the vibe too, maybe try using a different type of snare or mess with velocities etc.?

Keep on it man! nice!

dignan · Post by **dignan** » Mon Jun 15, 2009 4:41 pm

Gorbek wrote:
Dignan wrote:www.myspace.com/blindprohet01 - just put up something I've been messing around with for the past day. it's called "Silly String Noose". please let me know what you think!
Thanks Dignan, it's cool that you liked my boom track too, I thought I might be a bit crazy, gonna keep working on it.

You've got some nice laid back vibes going with silly noose.

Theres a echoey ding synth sound you have in there, and I feel like it might be out of time, it doesn't sound BAD, but I feel as if its off, you might have wanted that but I'm just letting you know it struck me when I listened.

Also, I feel like your snares are a bit harsh for the vibe too, maybe try using a different type of snare or mess with velocities etc.?

Keep on it man! nice!

you talking about the echoey part in the first half of the tune with the claps? or the second part where the snare comes in?

ianfm · Post by **ianfm** » Tue Jun 16, 2009 2:50 am

Just wonder what you guys think of this, production wise and what you think musically of these tracks:

Tried to remix this Nosaj Thing track, make it more ambient and give it a 2-stp beat with a nice rolling bass:
http://dl-client.getdropbox.com/u/71572 ... mix%29.mp3

Some kind of 8-bit experiment:
http://dl-client.getdropbox.com/u/71572 ... oud.10.mp3

Bumped this out today, i'm not sure about a lot of the synths yet, but I like the bare beat with the sub:
http://dl-client.getdropbox.com/u/71572 ... 0Layer.mp3

Thanks for (hopefully) listening!

mmplisskin · Post by **mmplisskin** » Tue Jun 16, 2009 4:31 pm

Ok so it dosen't have a title and my production level isnt so great so I really need some help Eqing and the wobble needs some help too....I am new to making Dubstep/electronic stuff so help would be greatly be appreciated!!'

By the way I am using massive and the ES1 for the basslines so if you have any tips for those....

http://soundcloud.com/mmplisskin/untitled-159

naphta · Post by **naphta** » Tue Jun 16, 2009 6:07 pm

not sure about this one... should I continue?
what could be done better?

http://soundcloud.com/naphta/paranoia-2

thanks!

5-0-what · Post by **5-0-what** » Tue Jun 16, 2009 8:15 pm

just a little sumting i been working on today ok a started it last night before i passed out come on people let me know what you think

thanks in advance

r · Post by r » Wed Jun 17, 2009 8:52 am

Gorbek wrote:
R wrote:
R wrote:workin on this vibe.. Just dont know how to extend it. Any feedback or ideas ?

http://www.speedyshare.com/586140661.html
Man, I see what you mean, by extending it do you mean you want it to drop and kinda get a bit heavier?

First off, that sounds really promising, I like the vibe big time. Maybe you should try introducing a new drum kit and bassline after the 'ahHhHhHh' in the background? Kind of difficult to describe what I mean...

Don't give up on it though!

I Made this last night between 1am and 7am... my prime working hours...

I'd love some feedback, I feel like this track could be huge!

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?yottkyo1nbm

Thanks!

thank u ! will give it a try

5-0-what · Post by **5-0-what** » Wed Jun 17, 2009 5:30 pm

five-ohh-what wrote:just a little sumting i been working on today ok a started it last night before i passed out come on people let me know what you think

thanks in advance

i give feedback people feel free to do the same

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