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Posted: Thu Jul 16, 2009 8:57 pm
by vice
sorry for the repost. here is my soundcloud I changed the song little bit. tell me what you think

thanks.
(my first post in this topic was very fast and I couldnt write anything sorry again)
http://soundcloud.com/vice3
Posted: Thu Jul 16, 2009 9:55 pm
by reignstep
- mail1234: chill out with the wobbles, you don't have to pump dubstep full of wobbles to make it dubstep

also work on your drums, they seem a bit off at times.
Vice wrote:sorry for the repost. here is my soundcloud I changed the song little bit. tell me what you think

thanks.
(my first post in this topic was very fast and I couldnt write anything sorry again)
http://soundcloud.com/vice3
Sounds like a brutal electro patch there

it's ok for a start but the mastering's not the best and the intro isn't great either. I like the drop and all that follows though
new project of mine, thought I'd go back to the dark and heavy dubstep
http://soundcloud.com/reignex/new-project
Posted: Thu Jul 16, 2009 10:56 pm
by m12
My first attempt at dubstep really.. Was wicked fun to make, so just seeing what any reactions are to people more used to listening to dubstep.
A trancey / melodic style thing.
Clip here:
http://www.mediafire.com/?lmkol0g3iin
320 available to anyone who wants it..
Edit:
Its also the first track on this:
http://www.myspace.com/mattengland1985
Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 10:18 am
by head transfer
nice sub bass, i like it whith the ringy sound to it

. The orchestral piece in my opinion needs some intro, maybe a small break or a low pass filter intro. great idea though, kind of floaty - carry-me-away-stuff...
I'm remastering my 3xdrop track to cut back on the compression and distortion some, it was kind of over the top wasn't it
I've also changed the bass on the second drop for some variety..
I'll upload when finished...
Re: Dansu - Dschinn
Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 11:54 am
by dansu
cum on guys, comment my tune.
you guys seem to know a lot bout the dubbs, listen to mine and comment it pleeze
Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 12:08 pm
by serox
I am at work right now so cannot listen to any of the new tunes posted up but I will do when I am back home in London.
Would appreciate any feedback on this if you can. I have loads more to do with it but not going to be able to sit down. Will change the patterns every 16th/32 and replace some hits with new sounds in places. Only heard on headphones so prob missing sub?
http://soundcloud.com/serox/serox-the-abandoned-base
Hey there
Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 12:12 pm
by baba da bass
Here's a piece im working on right now.
basically i started with a bass, then added the other stuff that's there right now and after listening a while i liked the rest more than the bass so it got thrown out...
http://uploaded.to/file/zds3yw
now here it is, comment and recommend a bass that would suit it.
thought of a simple sine sub, but i' open to other stuff as well.
Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 2:58 pm
by lhd
@ Dansu- Seriously, were those tears man? I scrolled back all the way to page 33 of this thread, guess how many people's tunes you commented on? NONE. This thread is for people who have an interest in the growth of others as well as themselves, it ain't free production school homey. Join the team and be a team player or stop crying about not getting put in the game. I would be happy to listen to joint but I hate posts that link me to a download site b/c I hate all that clutter on my comp. Get a soundcloud page and post on there pr a myspace page and I'll listen then, and be a friend to have one man, that's old news. Peace.
http://soundcloud.com
Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 3:37 pm
by head transfer
Serox wrote:I am at work right now so cannot listen to any of the new tunes posted up but I will do when I am back home in London.
Would appreciate any feedback on this if you can. I have loads more to do with it but not going to be able to sit down. Will change the patterns every 16th/32 and replace some hits with new sounds in places. Only heard on headphones so prob missing sub?
http://soundcloud.com/serox/serox-the-abandoned-base
without to much blabla, here are my suggestions (no obligations

)
The first hat to enter sounds pretty standard, like the ones on old drum synths of the standard dance hat in FL
The bass is really nice but i think if you'll listen on monitors or good speakers, you will find it needs remastering (sounds like youtube quality or something :p) but i guess this is what work in progress means right...
nice percussion going on!
Keep working on it and I think it'll end up real nice, or creepy
btw i edited my 3xdrop track on soundcloud, now under the name '3xdrop 2' (
http://soundcloud.com/head-transfer/3xdrop-2) is this an improvement?
Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 3:42 pm
by dansu
lol sorry, i`ll try to involve myself more into the community in future.
@this link you can stream the song
Dschinn.mp3 - 6.71MB
sry for bad behaviour etc :>
Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 3:55 pm
by lhd
@ Dansu- All good homey, my first post on the production forum was in all caps.

Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 4:04 pm
by serox
Head Transfer wrote:Serox wrote:I am at work right now so cannot listen to any of the new tunes posted up but I will do when I am back home in London.
Would appreciate any feedback on this if you can. I have loads more to do with it but not going to be able to sit down. Will change the patterns every 16th/32 and replace some hits with new sounds in places. Only heard on headphones so prob missing sub?
http://soundcloud.com/serox/serox-the-abandoned-base
without to much blabla, here are my suggestions (no obligations

)
The first hat to enter sounds pretty standard, like the ones on old drum synths of the standard dance hat in FL
The bass is really nice but i think if you'll listen on monitors or good speakers, you will find it needs remastering (sounds like youtube quality or something :p) but i guess this is what work in progress means right...
nice percussion going on!
Keep working on it and I think it'll end up real nice, or creepy
btw i edited my 3xdrop track on soundcloud, now under the name '3xdrop 2' (
http://soundcloud.com/head-transfer/3xdrop-2) is this an improvement?
Thanks for listening! I love 808/909 drums
I cannot hear what you mean with the bass:( I guess my monitors/headphones are not up for the job. What is the problem exactly if you can describe? no one else has mentioned it to me.
Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 4:18 pm
by dansu
you know, the problem is that i`m not a native speaker. and though my english-skills arent bad at all, i`m quite shy sometimes, when talking with native speakers.
but i`mma try my best:
Baba da Bass: tune is tight. i would prefer a simple sine-sub, with no attack and no release, since i find those would make the tune more dubby.
Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 8:15 pm
by HangManDubstep
NEW W.I.P........stayed with the oriental theme....plz enjoy
GIVE FEEDBACK!!!!!!!!!!
The Track is called FLUID KOMBAT
http://www.myspace.com/ruckusdubstep
Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 10:03 pm
by reignstep
Well the idea is good but I'm not really digging the sound of the bass , the notes are off at some points, and the song lacks alot of power, though I guess you still have to mix the whole
This one needs abit more working on
Posted: Sat Jul 18, 2009 12:31 am
by ruthyloops
First time posting in this thread. Heres something I've been working on for the night. there is a clip on my myspace player.- its a soundcloud clip. let me know what you think if you got the time.
www.myspace.com/twitch222 peaz

Posted: Sat Jul 18, 2009 8:11 am
by ahaha! ahaha!
Start of a new tune im working on, whaddaya think?
EDIT: NEW link -
http://www.mediafire.com/?nnmr0iuzdnz
Any feedback much appreciated.
Posted: Sat Jul 18, 2009 12:34 pm
by head transfer
Serox wrote:Head Transfer wrote:Serox wrote:I am at work right now so cannot listen to any of the new tunes posted up but I will do when I am back home in London.
Would appreciate any feedback on this if you can. I have loads more to do with it but not going to be able to sit down. Will change the patterns every 16th/32 and replace some hits with new sounds in places. Only heard on headphones so prob missing sub?
http://soundcloud.com/serox/serox-the-abandoned-base
without to much blabla, here are my suggestions (no obligations

)
The first hat to enter sounds pretty standard, like the ones on old drum synths of the standard dance hat in FL
The bass is really nice but i think if you'll listen on monitors or good speakers, you will find it needs remastering (sounds like youtube quality or something :p) but i guess this is what work in progress means right...
nice percussion going on!
Keep working on it and I think it'll end up real nice, or creepy
btw i edited my 3xdrop track on soundcloud, now under the name '3xdrop 2' (
http://soundcloud.com/head-transfer/3xdrop-2) is this an improvement?
Thanks for listening! I love 808/909 drums
I cannot hear what you mean with the bass:( I guess my monitors/headphones are not up for the job. What is the problem exactly if you can describe? no one else has mentioned it to me.
ok, i thought you were just being lazy and putting in standard sounds

but if you want that sound, i guess that's just your style
(to me) the bass sounds like you pumped up the lower frequencies without considering the higher ones, wich gives it a sort of damped sound. It could just be me though, it was just my first impression...

but really, nice song. keep it up, I didn't want to put you down or anything

Posted: Sat Jul 18, 2009 4:34 pm
by koo
http://soundcloud.com/kooma/speed-2
One of the first attempts to make any kind of music from me. Made it in FL.
Looked at the waveform in soundcloud and looks like it seriously needs some mixing.
Bash it, would be nice to know what's good place to start improving.
Posted: Sat Jul 18, 2009 5:36 pm
by soupdogg
Ditch the chiptune shit it gave me a headache, tighten up the drums, make them crisper, sharper. the bassline sounds like it was meant for a completely different track, and is very flat.