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Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 8:39 pm
by contakt321
rook wrote:Hey there! I've been sitting on a remix of that David After Dentist youtube video. (original video @ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=txqiwrbYGrs)

It's mostly done, but there are a couple mistakes and in huge need of polishing/a proper mixdown.

I would absolutely love any critiques people have to give as I'm still relatively clueless when it comes to good mixing/eqing/compression.

The ending section is slightly out of pitch and looses some energy, so I may be redoing that, iduno.

Thanks in advance!

http://soundcloud.com/rook/dentist-trip
I don't know if I have any useful comments other than that I would fall out laughing and love this if I heard this drunk at a club. Nice one!

Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 9:11 pm
by rook
contakt321 wrote:
rook wrote:Hey there! I've been sitting on a remix of that David After Dentist youtube video. (original video @ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=txqiwrbYGrs)

It's mostly done, but there are a couple mistakes and in huge need of polishing/a proper mixdown.

I would absolutely love any critiques people have to give as I'm still relatively clueless when it comes to good mixing/eqing/compression.

The ending section is slightly out of pitch and looses some energy, so I may be redoing that, iduno.

Thanks in advance!

http://soundcloud.com/rook/dentist-trip

I don't know if I have any useful comments other than that I would fall out laughing and love this if I heard this drunk at a club. Nice one!

haha! thanks man :]

new track, BLUE STRIPES, on the player

Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 11:19 pm
by deepend
new track, BLUE STRIPES, on the player

http://www.myspace.com/deependstepmusic

Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 12:55 pm
by naus
Megaladon wrote:@ Naus- Enjoyed both of those, they sound like actual songs rather than the 'bits and bobs' I put together. Very chilled- can't say more on the production to be honest, I like it like this.

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Nice one bro! thanks for the feedback.

paravrais

Thanks to you also for the feedback il be sure to look out for your bits.

Back to the lab!

Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 7:29 pm
by naus
paravrais wrote:And lo I have returned!

My 2 DnB tunes at the top of my player are much better than my dubstep but this is dubstepforum so I guess I should ask for feedback on "highness" and "cat" my two latest ventures into dubstep. (Posted Cat on here a while ago but its undergone a few changes since then.) Tunes are on my myspace here - http://www.myspace.com/sativabreather


My eyes are hurting so im gonna get off the comp but I might drop more feedback later if I get some!
Cat - Nice idea man. some of the synth sounds sound as if they could do with a bit of beef imo.
The bassline/synth is pretty cool! tbh on the second drop i was expecting some big snares would sound good i rekon. nice

Highness - Again nice intro and melodies. Think the beats need alot of beefing up though imo layering more snares and kicks n ting.


:)

Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 7:34 pm
by naus
SW@T wrote:Heh.. repost!
Sorry guys :)

I am still pretty fucking new to production and need some pointers...HELP!

Got a couple tracks up on http://www.myspace.com/djswat

If your bored or just like stating your opinion, feel free to go nuts!

Thanks in advance Smile

D

P.S.
Tracks:
The Rumble, Rehab, 6 Million, Basscase < not really dubstep. But all the rest are. They are all very different from each other.

My fav is 6 million...nice beats and atmospheric sounds! some low subby bass would sound nice here and there i rekon love the track though dark n moody.

Posted: Fri May 29, 2009 5:51 am
by 5-0-what
contakt321 wrote:
rook wrote:Hey there! I've been sitting on a remix of that David After Dentist youtube video. (original video @ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=txqiwrbYGrs)

It's mostly done, but there are a couple mistakes and in huge need of polishing/a proper mixdown.

I would absolutely love any critiques people have to give as I'm still relatively clueless when it comes to good mixing/eqing/compression.

The ending section is slightly out of pitch and looses some energy, so I may be redoing that, iduno.

Thanks in advance!

http://soundcloud.com/rook/dentist-trip
I don't know if I have any useful comments other than that I would fall out laughing and love this if I heard this drunk at a club. Nice one!
i would start by saying i love the tune but the bass in the first drop is really smashin the drums to death i love the vocal sample and the drum programming at like 3:00 is redonkulis fucking crazy and now again at 4:00 this track never stops evolving i would love to here the final product banging on some loud system

Posted: Fri May 29, 2009 7:37 pm
by rook
five-ohh-what wrote:
contakt321 wrote:
rook wrote:Hey there! I've been sitting on a remix of that David After Dentist youtube video. (original video @ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=txqiwrbYGrs)


http://soundcloud.com/rook/dentist-trip
I don't know if I have any useful comments other than that I would fall out laughing and love this if I heard this drunk at a club. Nice one!
i would start by saying i love the tune but the bass in the first drop is really smashin the drums to death i love the vocal sample and the drum programming at like 3:00 is redonkulis fucking crazy and now again at 4:00 this track never stops evolving i would love to here the final product banging on some loud system
Thanks! I'll definitely try and clean up the bass/drums.

Posted: Fri May 29, 2009 10:21 pm
by wrexile

Posted: Fri May 29, 2009 11:09 pm
by kujikuru
i like that beat.....can't be a critique 'cos i'm a newbie but its ambient. wat software u using if u dnt mind me askin?

Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 12:12 pm
by melodik
http://soundcloud.com/melodik/business-1


new ting....keen to know what all the heads be thinking, crit would be madly appreciated :D

onetime!

Posted: Sun May 31, 2009 4:38 am
by deadly_habit
http://www13.zippyshare.com/v/94262186/file.html

close to completion, choppage/drumfunk dnb number so semi out of context for this board.

Posted: Sun May 31, 2009 12:29 pm
by naus
Deadly Habit wrote:http://www13.zippyshare.com/v/94262186/file.html

close to completion, choppage/drumfunk dnb number so semi out of context for this board.
hey,

love this. The drum edits are really nice, as is the subtle bass and atmos. Very metalheadzy lol

maybe some pitch changes in the drums at points would and a little more variation if you think thats needed... im not sure!

good work!

Posted: Sun May 31, 2009 1:17 pm
by legend4ry
http://vandalism.20twelvedubstep.com/al ... -e-p-tt016


Thought i'd just put it here so more people download it hehe..

Posted: Sun May 31, 2009 6:15 pm
by higgzbozon
We have a new 320 up for download, would be nice to recieve some feedback! (also play it everywhere you like :wink:)

Higgz Bozon & Walter Ego - Badman Pull Up

P.s. Soundcloud seems to somehow add a wierd low noise to the tune, the download version is okay though... (any tips on this?)

Posted: Sun May 31, 2009 9:05 pm
by dirtyparadise
hi all, i'm new here and first of all sorry for my english
I was made a remix of a film "Rockers" :oops:

http://soundcloud.com/dirtyparadise/dir ... ah-no-dead

Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 12:06 am
by Y_H
http://soundcloud.com/matthewcradduck/m ... -sumerians
if anyone could give me some feedback on this track it would be good :)
thankss
was playing around with percussion proaly for the first time.

Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 4:04 am
by tripwire22
New stuff up plz offer criticism and comments

myspace.com/trpwr

Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 3:17 pm
by FSTZ1
New Kojak bootleg

http://www.soundcloud.com/kojakdubs

enjoy!