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TECHNO GASH - Brand New Stomping Choon FREE DOWNLOAD
Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 10:31 am
by albo
New tune I'm making,
Would find it extremely useful to have some feedback.... PLEASE!
albo.
http://soundcloud.com/albo/techno-gash
Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 11:11 am
by kraftpeanutbutterbear
downloading thanks
nice
Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 12:49 pm
by alfordtq1
nice intro man the bassline is good but if was a little more grimy would be a sick tune if u finish and are happy wud love a 320
nice
Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 12:49 pm
by alfordtq1
nice intro man the bassline is good but if was a little more grimy would be a sick tune if u finish and are happy wud love a 320
Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 5:24 pm
by albo
Cheers for the feedback!
Grimey in what way? An oozing, dirty bassline?
Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 12:31 am
by oli90
"Try layering the bass with a sub if you think it sounds thin"
Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 7:46 am
by albo
hmm, ok cheers oli90 i'll see how it go's
Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 6:12 pm
by fuzz_2k
turn the sample up a bit cant really here what he's sayin
the rest of it sounds algood...
is that a youngone's sample btw??
Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 10:58 pm
by actraiser
saw it was new and wanted to add some constructive criticism but the track is horrible.. really harsh on the ears. no soul here at all.. sorry
Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 12:22 am
by oli90
That's a bit harsh man
Everyone starts somewhere, you could at least give a few pointers.
Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 7:48 am
by albo
Haha, Sorry Actraiser, I'm very new, and maybe not your sort of thing?
Probably is too harsh on the old lug holes, I was going for a raw noise and maybe went too far?
Thanks for the feedback everyone! Extremely useful!
Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 11:08 am
by ReturnTrip
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 11:13 am
by cyberdyne
kicks too pissant
the noise synths are up too loud and too frequent...need to fade them back and polish them a bit...just cant have them that raw...too harsh