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Smart Mutherfucker track - feedback?

Posted: Mon Sep 14, 2009 12:08 pm
by xtal
Yo!

Fairly new around this forum, got a couple tracks of mine up on my myspace - would appreciate any feedback.
320's available on request!

http://www.myspace.com/charliebrownbeats

Posted: Mon Sep 14, 2009 12:52 pm
by mistayif
you need to work on eq'ing the bass section for smart muthafucker because all 3 elements (kick, sub-bass and lead) are all fighting for the same bit of space and its sounding very muddy. good ideas on the track though

Posted: Mon Sep 14, 2009 1:35 pm
by xtal
Cheers!

Yes after reading your feedback and going back to it I can see what you mean.
I've given EQ-ing a shot and uploaded the track again so an update of how it sounds would be great!

Posted: Mon Sep 14, 2009 9:04 pm
by kraftpeanutbutterbear
ho, dirty dirty thing
have you made the changes ? I like the effect on the bass
I'm on for a 320 if you share it
thanks

Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 10:16 am
by xtal
Safe - yeah will post up on here once it's complete! Just working on an ending and mixing :)

Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 10:25 am
by B_90
Yer man feelin it. 320 wouold get rinsed.

Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 10:26 am
by snypadub
would love a 320 nice work man!

Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 12:53 pm
by mistayif
its better but i think the kick and the bass are still fighting for the same frequencies, try eq'ing it so the bass and the kick occupies two different frequency zones.
in my tracks, i eq it so the bass occupies from about 60hz to 100hz and cut everything else and have the kick eq'ed at around 200hz - 400hz with slight boosts higher up in the frequency scale

Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 2:23 pm
by xtal
I've been working on it loads since the myspace upload - thanks for pointing it all out as I would of just let it slide without thinking about it really! Like I said, fairly new on the dubstep producing - used to just fluff about before making any genres/noise ha! :)

Final version up soon soon!

Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 4:18 pm
by mistayif
some pretty good ideas in that track.
i've been producing for quite a while now, used to do hip hop for a couple years and been doing dubstep for about 2 months now and my mixdowns are still pretty shit. i think its the fact that i just generally can't be bothered with them. i'll just get them to an acceptable standard and then move on.