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Really need some feedback on a track.

Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 7:20 pm
by izaac c
hey guys, basicaly I've learnt production through drums and bass, dubstep has raped my mind lately really loving whats goin on!
I live in the sticks wheres theres basicaly no one anywhere so really want some feedback on this tune, i dont know if this is in the right direction but really loving that filthy 16 bit sound.

http://www.myspace.com/bassmentsuburb 'Fist Eater' please someone have a listen an tell me where im at as i seem to post on so many forums and no one replies. safe

Re: Really need some feedback on a track.

Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 11:15 pm
by izaac c
gaaah

Re: Really need some feedback on a track.

Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 12:05 am
by kraftpeanutbutterbear
I'm not a producer so sorry for my uncapability of advise on production and mastering but...
Here is my feeling :

It's a little bit sloppy, lacking of rythme here, but the sounds you've use in the rythme section are really nice.
Don't really like the decrencendo bass notes. I think the melody is a little wick as easy.
Your second track on your myspace is far better than this one for my ears.

Re: Really need some feedback on a track.

Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 12:58 am
by _boring
tune-wise, its semi-predictable, but the vibe makes up for it. i think it's pretty cool tho i'd love to check out an mp3 in the mix instead of the myspace.

i just dont know how i feel about the farting puke drop that comes in after the LFO groove :lol: i'm trying to stay away from things that sound like the are farting or puking (at least when there are girls on the dancefloor) :lol: i think that if you started that 2nd sound at the 2nd drop instead of starting it during the first section it works a lot better with that big dub bassline that it does with the outwright pukin lol :lol:

mixdown isnt that bad it seems but still could use some work,

altho if u switched it to just have that sound at the second drop bassline i'd try it out for sure!

i'd say the biggest advice i ever got on producing is take your time and let the tune really develop itself sometimes; this sounds like a good skeleton tho.

maybe check out GAMMA AUDIO recordings for some influence? :t: :mrgreen:

Re: Really need some feedback on a track.

Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 1:38 am
by mars
yo!

this isn't bad. i like the 2nd drop. big!
keep at it.
i'd get rid of that fart-like sound that comes at random times haha :)
and the snares seem to duck a bit behind the other sounds after the 2nd drop.
but iunno mayn, other than that, sounds pretty damn good!

cheers!

Re: Really need some feedback on a track.

Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 2:09 am
by thehILL
its big, nicely broken up.. huge grimey bass :o.. i like it

Re: Really need some feedback on a track.

Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 2:14 am
by izaac c
ah wicked vibes guys nice one for the constructive critasizm ++

yer as always with me its an unfinished product ha, basicaly i've been using a 512mb ram pc for 3 yrs makin ideas only and finaly got a 3.07ghz quad core with 8.5gb ddr3. Big let down though as I've goten the hand of cubase at a friends but the cracked version wont work on vista 64bit(fair enough i suppose), but gona buy it when i save um some dosh (pretty impossible but gota happen) infact the reason i bought it was for cubase, gah never mind just have to carry on with reason 4, which is a cool program but has to many limits =[ really got my head around it though, everything needs alot more work to get phatness than my experiences on other programs.

will let u guys know when a finished tune is up.

nice one

Re: Really need some feedback on a track.

Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 2:27 am
by _boring
yea man safe keep pluggin!

Re: Really need some feedback on a track.

Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 8:08 pm
by izaac c
safe! :L