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First Tune - Feedback please

Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 2:40 am
by mamosa
First tune i am reasonably happy with, probs needs a lot of work any help would be much apprecieted

its on myspace

www.myspace.com/djmamosa

Thankyou :?:

Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 2:50 am
by misk
dude, the tune kicks ASS until the first drop. The bass is way too loud, and distorted.

I seriously like where this tune is going though, if you eq'ed the bass at the first drop, it would kick way more ass... keep working at it man, im loving the mood! :5:

Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 2:53 am
by mamosa
cheers man i was thinking that too, its ruff still need to iron out that distortion a little without affecting too much i guess..

cheers again man

Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 7:17 pm
by jasdeep
It's ok, I like the roboticness of the drums but as the guy said above the bass needs sorting out. The arrangement is pretty good too.

For a first tune its not bad, I was making random spastic rubbish when I first started out and probably still am.

Check my tune if you get the chance http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?t=11174

Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 5:24 pm
by cringer
this tunes is heavy! the bass sounds distorted on my end too, but i can never tell shit through Myspazz player. if you get that bass sorted, i'll take a 320!!

Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 9:41 pm
by mamosa
safe, got some Uni work to do bit then will sort it out, thinking theres a lot of work i can do with this one - i'll post a 320 when im done