Page 1 of 1
Dispatch by Thawn (wobbler)
Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 8:11 pm
by Thawn
Hi DSF, tis my first post here.
I have a track i think i have just finished, called Dispatch. Need as many pointers as i can get really
My main issue with this track is the flow of it really, have a listen and tell me what you think, theres a clip on myspace, ful version on soundcloud
links in sig, thanks
Thawn
Re: Dispatch by Thawn (wobbler)
Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 10:03 pm
by darkmatteruk
see what you mean by the flow of it, is a bit stop starty, not that thats a bad thing, could prob do with a few synth/string rises in places. cool track
Re: Dispatch by Thawn (wobbler)
Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 11:18 pm
by Thawn
Thanks for the fb. Anyone else got anything good, or bad to say about this?
Really could do with some helpful pointers
Re: Dispatch by Thawn (wobbler)
Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 1:56 pm
by Thawn
guess not lol
Re: Dispatch by Thawn (wobbler)
Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 8:52 pm
by Thawn
Turning into what some might call an epic fail
Re: Dispatch by Thawn (wobbler)
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 6:04 pm
by Thawn
Last effort

Re: Dispatch by Thawn (wobbler)
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 9:27 pm
by wubber stumpper
Dope track man, ever think of integrating some higher passed dnb/break session like havocNdeed use in that "Paris is Burning" remix? Try making it more interesting by switching shit up, maybe add an additional wub, ect.
Re: Dispatch by Thawn (wobbler)
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 9:28 pm
by wubber stumpper
oops
Re: Dispatch by Thawn (wobbler)
Posted: Sat Nov 21, 2009 4:12 pm
by Thawn
wubber stumpper wrote:Dope track man, ever think of integrating some higher passed dnb/break session like havocNdeed use in that "Paris is Burning" remix? Try making it more interesting by switching shit up, maybe add an additional wub, ect.
I dont know that remix unfortunately, will get on the youtube case though.
Thanks for the comments, glad you liked it. I may try make some improvements to it, i have a few more in the works
Anyone else on it?
EDIT: I just noticed, towards the end theres a bit of a fuck up on this tune, bassline over a bassline, so if you get that far, dont watch that

Re: Dispatch by Thawn (wobbler)
Posted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 12:10 am
by aspect-dubz
nice man, im liking the off key approach on this one. good work

Re: Dispatch by Thawn (wobbler)
Posted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 10:05 pm
by Thawn
Thankyou