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I've Noticed Humilty Does't Work on this Board....

Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 1:52 pm
by c-zar
<am, can some one critique my track. Ya'll are just ignoring it and I constantly review other tracks. Seems like ya;ll just want something for free,

Anyway..I am trying to be humble but this is getting fustratued. What do ya'll freaking think of the tracks.

Am i that freaking bad?

I am thinking about quitting.

:D
LINK


DROP A LINK IF YOU WANT A REVIEW!

Re: lavish sofie (she's a cheater) (criticism wanted)

Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 4:58 pm
by c-zar
i put a different version up :P

Re: lavish sofie (she's a cheater) (criticism wanted)

Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 7:50 pm
by c-zar
criticism please

Re: lavish sofie (she's a cheater) (criticism wanted)

Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 9:51 am
by c-zar
bump

Re: I've Noticed Humilty Does't Work on this Board....

Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 11:34 am
by c-zar
can i get at least on review?

Re: I've Noticed Humilty Does't Work on this Board....

Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 11:50 am
by z6z
awesome track man, i like it ! Tho the car-beep sound gets a lil bit annyoing imo
wanna send me 320?

Re: I've Noticed Humilty Does't Work on this Board....

Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 11:52 am
by c-zar
sure!


how would i send it?

Re: I've Noticed Humilty Does't Work on this Board....

Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 11:56 am
by z6z
dno, upload it to somewhere and pm me the link ?

Re: I've Noticed Humilty Does't Work on this Board....

Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 12:06 pm
by c-zar
cool

Re: I've Noticed Humilty Does't Work on this Board....

Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 1:28 pm
by particle-jim
one thread per tune, dont constantly bump your various threads, dont get angry that no1 is giving you feedback, no1 owes you a review, dont try and act like you've been humble on here coz you're pretty much a 1 man spam machine and thats why everyone is ignoring you, you are annoying

come back when you have a better attitude

Re: I've Noticed Humilty Does't Work on this Board....

Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 1:33 pm
by particle-jim
might as well give it a review tho eh? The track is awkward, over crowded and badly quantized, none of it sits where it should and it doesnt make much sense. Your lady gaga remix is equally painful to listen to and doesn't work with the vocals at all

Re: I've Noticed Humilty Does't Work on this Board....

Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 2:49 pm
by c-zar
you listened to the wrong track.

Re: I've Noticed Humilty Does't Work on this Board....

Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 3:18 pm
by particle-jim
i listened to both, they where both piss poor

Re: I've Noticed Humilty Does't Work on this Board....

Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 3:29 pm
by Blue Patterns
can't listen to it where I am...but I'm dling it.

but in regards to your complaint....there's 100 000 tunes posted on here every day. Myself, I pretty much choose songs from here randomly. Perhaps if it's a user name I recognize from the production forum I check it. There's just so many songs....and very often even when checking it randomly they're all very similar wobblers so that can put me off unless it's a VERY GOOD wobbler.

I also post shit on here from time to time....it is what it is. I wouldn't take anything that goes down on DSF personally though.

Re: I've Noticed Humilty Does't Work on this Board....

Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 7:37 pm
by basicanarchy101
Yeah dude learn a bit more about compression/limiting/percieved volume vs power/ and try n makeyour drums a bit groovier... not bad startin out though, keep at it...

N you think its hard to get people to reiew tracks on here? Try bein a dj in the mixes section! If your not a major label name, major label producer, or willing to play a striaght borgore ripoff set, they want nothing to do with you round here.

Re: I've Noticed Humilty Does't Work on this Board....

Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 7:39 pm
by icebagg
i feel you dude, im on this shit all day checkin out new shit, but noone seems to listen to mine hahaa, i dont get it

Re: I've Noticed Humilty Does't Work on this Board....

Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 7:40 pm
by icebagg
dope track btw nice work man

Re: I've Noticed Humilty Does't Work on this Board....

Posted: Wed Jan 06, 2010 5:47 am
by GELG
basicanarchy101 wrote:N you think its hard to get people to reiew tracks on here? Try bein a dj in the mixes section! If your not a major label name, major label producer, or willing to play a striaght borgore ripoff set, they want nothing to do with you round here.
Amen. :i:

Re: I've Noticed Humilty Does't Work on this Board....

Posted: Wed Jan 06, 2010 10:09 am
by c-zar
I am just saying. It seems like trolls get more attention around here than the actual serious musicians. I've seen some trolls get paragraphs of pretty good comprehensive critics. People like me get nothing. I may need work on my track but at least people could tell me that than ignore me and constantly kiss up to recognizable names.

P.S. Theres a lot of haters on this board as well.

Re: I've Noticed Humilty Does't Work on this Board....

Posted: Wed Jan 06, 2010 2:11 pm
by sub7
The only way you get people to critique you is if you don't act like a total jerk off. People will read this thread and think you are a total jack off.

You overall track volume is not good. You should just listen to more dubs from established producers and compare them to your dubs. So what's the difference? Your trackmixing is wack. You have that perc synth that's louder than your drums and it sounds not good. Read the production bible about 10 times over in the production forum. That may actually sort you out some.

The difference is you are not paying attention to the things that are most important. If you want to write quality dubs, there are many things you will need to work on. I would spend at least a year just learning about sound in general, I would pay more attention to my levels and how my frequencies are supposed to sit in the mix. I would spend a lot of time listening to quality dubs and learning what makes them quality, constantly going back and forth between the quality dubs and your dubs and try to understand what the differences are. If you can't tell the difference between quality dubs, mediocre dubs and poor quality dubs then how are you supposed to understand what is what?

Also you responded to your own thread 10 times in 2 days, that's just lame dude, have a little patience. Be positive, you will not get anyway on this site acting like a tnuc I promise you that. Did you ever think that feedback or advice isn't all you need? It's attention to detail, learning techniques and working on them until you have mastered those techniques.

You have 2 choices.

1. You can keep acting like a jack off and post a song and respond to your own posts with frustration and anxiety over why people are not responding.

2. You can work more on learning about sound and about track volume, how to produce a quality snare, how to produce a quality kick drum, how to produce quality bass, work on understanding rhythm and percussion, learn more about software and what works for you and be a positive.

This site is much bigger than you and what you need to do is to learn how to be part of it and be positive. I would take choice 2 if I were you.

It took me about a year to get good feedback on what I was doing, it took a lot of studying and a lot of hours spent on developing sounds properly.

Good luck. and don't respond to this either.