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Hi there, i've just finished a track and thought i'd post it here for evaluation. I use all free programs, and this is only one of the first few tracks i've produced that has actually sounded any good. It's not perfect, so any feedback you can give me - fire away!

thanks, Jacob.

http://download.yousendit.com/069F983650C7417D

no one got any thoughts on this? i don't care if you fucking despise it, anyone that's listened to it, it'd be great if you could share your thoughts. cheeeeeers.

Kind of like it (although the section starting at 3.20 approx sounds a bit wrong). Like the glitchiness and the electro feel but I think the structure lets it down a bit, sort of meanders off without really having a destination.

It's quite quirky though and it's good to hear someone doing something different. I think a few hints of reverb and maybe some other instrumentation might ease the parts where there's not too much going on as it sounds a bit bare in places as it is.

love the name sodium nitelife...
yeh, the glitchy idm feel to this is cool. good clean sound on the whole too...
nice deep bass...
the horns in this sound wrong tho...

thanks alot for listening. yeh i find structuring tunes one of the hardest bits - was reading with interest the topic on it started today. point taken about the horns - i wanted to try something with them but you're right, i'm not sure they really fit. Anyhow thanks again, i think i'll post another tune shortly, don't want to saturate the board though haha. have a good night.

sodium nightlife wrote:thanks alot for listening. yeh i find structuring tunes one of the hardest bits - was reading with interest the topic on it started today. point taken about the horns - i wanted to try something with them but you're right, i'm not sure they really fit. Anyhow thanks again, i think i'll post another tune shortly, don't want to saturate the board though haha. have a good night.

could see where you were goin with the brass, didnt quite work though - i think the samples could have been stronger, but with tighter arrangement they'd work nice....

yeh thanks alot - pretty bummed out though, every time i try to open this track for further work the project just crashes so this one will have to stay as it stands. But thanks for all the feedback, i'm gonna check out your tunes tomorrow when i get on some proper internet. Cheers.