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GRIMEY- djekim

Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2010 3:32 am
by djekim
heres a new track that ive been working on.

feedback is always welcome

Soundcloud

Re: GRIMEY- djekim

Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2010 3:52 am
by zonetrooper5
In

Post in this thread to get feedback however you will need to give feedback on three other songs before people will give feedback on your song:

http://www.dubstepforum.com/works-in-pr ... 32395.html

Re: GRIMEY- djekim

Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2010 4:07 am
by tavravlavish
n00000b

Re: GRIMEY- djekim

Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2010 4:10 am
by upstateface
Inb4lock

Re: GRIMEY- djekim

Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2010 9:10 am
by djekim
the song is done except for the final master. its set to release so i dont want to put up the master anyway

and as for the word noob....


wow

Re: GRIMEY- djekim

Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2010 9:38 am
by jaydot
There's a thread for feedback.... :)

Re: GRIMEY- djekim

Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2010 9:39 am
by JFK
iN b4 Da LOK

Re: GRIMEY- djekim

Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2010 10:18 am
by nowaysj
what a

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Re: GRIMEY- djekim

Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2010 11:50 am
by Echoi
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Re: GRIMEY- djekim

Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2010 12:09 pm
by serox
Sorry if this sounds harsh but when I put up any clips I want to hear it straight.

I thought the intro had potential but it didn't do anything. The vocal at the drop is cheese and sounds like "everybody dance now" which is an over used sample. The bass needs work and doesn't even flow or fit with the track. In fact, nothing sounds in time at all to me. The drums, the bass and the sample all sound out of place and do nothing for each other.

The track has no melody and the first bar is the same throughout the whole thing so it gets boring quite quick.

btw, IN.

Re: GRIMEY- djekim

Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2010 12:53 pm
by drokkr
Another one? IN. We need a bigger font for those stickies.

Re: GRIMEY- djekim

Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2010 1:47 pm
by deadly_habit
Sharmaji wrote:#1. DON'T BE A DUMBASS

rule #1 can manifest itself in many, many ways. The most common one is DON'T BREAK THE LAW IN PLAIN DAYLIGHT. IE, don't ask/post about cracked software or warez on a public forum, and don't share copyrighted material (most commonly, samples).

#2. New to dubstep? Got a question about production? Welcome to the family. We're more than happy to help, but it's a 2-way street, so do your due diligence: USE THE SEARCH BUTTON and READ THE STICKIES before you ask.

#3. As fellow producers, we want to hear your tunes, tune ideas, synthesis projects, etc. there's 2 threads up top for feedback-- post 'em there, rather than making a new thread.

that's all.