Cookie Monsta - Ginger Pubes (College Hill's Maryland Remix)

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Cookie Monsta - Ginger Pubes (College Hill's Maryland Remix)

Post by collige » Tue May 04, 2010 4:02 pm

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Re: Cookie Monsta - Ginger Pubes (College Hill's Maryland Remix)

Post by WeedKeepa » Tue May 04, 2010 4:18 pm

The bass is coming along nicely! Personally i recon it would be advantageous to add a little more high end on the bass so it stands out more over the sub. Maybe run it through a hi-pass filter? Maybe increase the cutoff slightly? Overall though, great track :D

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Re: Cookie Monsta - Ginger Pubes (College Hill's Maryland Remix)

Post by NeonOrdnance » Tue May 04, 2010 9:03 pm

I LOVE that synth work you have going there in the first drop. Needs way more of that! Big ups to B-more as well. I'm from DC and you guys always get the good music before us.

What does the track need? It needs more. More, more more. More hi-hats (if you produce anything like me, waaaaaaay more. I like to have DnB-level hi-hats-- listen to any of my tracks on SoundCloud and you'll see what I mean). The breaks that come in around the 3 minute mark are pretty cool, you should have more of those in the track. I like the little sound FX you have right before the drop at 2:45ish, definitely put more of those in there. You have some nice atmospheric synths as well, but they get a little repetitive. Maybe switch them up a bit?

As a remix... it needs more. The vocals need to come in more-- give the listener something to "latch on to," it helps with name recognition. It's much harder to remember a track if there's no "signature"-- a sample, a riff, a jingle, whatever.

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Re: Cookie Monsta - Ginger Pubes (College Hill's Maryland Remix)

Post by kievccs » Wed May 05, 2010 3:16 am

Didn't feel it bro i'm sorry :( i think it need more punchiness in about every sound, and it's suppose to be a remix and i didn't feel any vibe from the original one in this. :( But don't worry mate keep working on that beat we can always do best :) Cheers

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Re: Cookie Monsta - Ginger Pubes (College Hill's Maryland Remix)

Post by mars » Thu May 06, 2010 7:31 am

i think it's an interesting take on the original. very different.
the thing is, yeah it does sound unfinished. for example, ur kicks are ducking behind the sub bass, u have to make them punchier and make them stand out. ur synths could use a bit more processing, but ur definitely onto something here, man.
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