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Heys guys! Basically just been working in some ideas into a track. Heres like 1:51 of it, would really appreciate it if you could give me feedback, what i could do to improve it and how i would do so. Im using fl 9 with the usual like massive, sumo vst etc etc.

Even if you say its really shit, I would appreicte it if you said how its shit and give me your opinion on how i could improve the shitness lol.

Thankyouuuuuuu!


p.s. first dubstep track so keep that in mind

http://soundcloud.com/understar/first-d ... ck-improvs

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Alright mate, if you look at the top of this subforum there's a thread called 'works in progress'. Stick your track in there and you should hopefully get some feedback! Review some other users who've posted in there too whilst you're at it.

There's also a 'dubs' section of this website where you can put your finished tracks for people to listen to.

ohh sorry man! thankyou ill put it in there now

p.s. fucking sick track maan! like it alot

chazzleman wrote:Heys guys! Basically just been working in some ideas into a track. Heres like 1:51 of it, would really appreciate it if you could give me feedback, what i could do to improve it and how i would do so. Im using fl 9 with the usual like massive, sumo vst etc etc.

Even if you say its really shit, I would appreicte it if you said how its shit and give me your opinion on how i could improve the shitness lol.

Thankyouuuuuuu!


p.s. first dubstep track so keep that in mind

http://soundcloud.com/understar/first-d ... ck-improvs

The intro sounds like a preset synth and its boring. I would suggest you take the groove from the track and have it somewhere in the intro to help make it familiar for listeners and get the head nodding in time.

The bass sound is overused. There are a million other people doing the same thing!

serox wrote:

chazzleman wrote:Heys guys! Basically just been working in some ideas into a track. Heres like 1:51 of it, would really appreciate it if you could give me feedback, what i could do to improve it and how i would do so. Im using fl 9 with the usual like massive, sumo vst etc etc.

Even if you say its really shit, I would appreicte it if you said how its shit and give me your opinion on how i could improve the shitness lol.

Thankyouuuuuuu!


p.s. first dubstep track so keep that in mind

http://soundcloud.com/understar/first-d ... ck-improvs

The intro sounds like a preset synth and its boring. I would suggest you take the groove from the track and have it somewhere in the intro to help make it familiar for listeners and get the head nodding in time.

The bass sound is overused. There are a million other people doing the same thing!

Yeah, well i was gunna have some vocals in there aswell but im working on bring the groove in! okay thanks, what do you reccomend i do then? im looking to fill the overused bass sounds with more sort of bass sounds but not flipping wobbles. sort of like a nero sound? or in Kick snare by crissy criss.

Thanks btw!

chazzleman wrote:

Yeah, well i was gunna have some vocals in there aswell but im working on bring the groove in! okay thanks, what do you reccomend i do then? im looking to fill the overused bass sounds with more sort of bass sounds but not flipping wobbles. sort of like a nero sound? or in Kick snare by crissy criss.

Thanks btw!

I would avoid the vocals, they are harder to do than you may think. It is too easy to add some random shit in and think it sounds good but when you look back later it sounds like cheese or out of place.

I would try and make things a lot more basic with the groove. A simple beat/loop with 1 kick, 1 snare and 2 hats and a couple of percs is all you need imo. Make that groove interesting and not straight generic shit!

Once you have that basic groove then use that for your intro but replace the sounds with something else, lighter and with some bits removed but try keep them on the same place so its like the main groove of the track.

thanks for the help! will get on with it.

and the dog eating the cat? i dont understanddd..

ur the cat and the mods are the dog and ur IN his mouth

yeah i tried to hard

tripwire22 wrote:ur the cat and the mods are the dog and ur IN his mouth

yeah i tried to hard

hahaha good one. have to start somewhere though, i dont mind getting mauled by dogs as long as im getting feedback to make it sound better then so be it

ill feed back u later. plus if u have aim add me