Comedy Sketch Grimey Stereotypes

[Ear Drum]

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Check it out. my first and only sketch so constructive criticism and positive feedback is really appreciated as Im looking to improve and make more.

[steshine]

acting is terrible but a decent script could have helped to resolve that.... sorry man but that sketch literally had nothing to it and the punch line was poor.