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ok so iv had reason 4 and an axiom 25 for about a month now. i havent got much time to really get going with it because of work and school but i will this summer. anyway heres an intro and a loop of my first ever song on reason. and its dubstep ofc. anyways give me your opinions, any pointers, and where i should go with the rest of the song. thanks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tohiahzOgDI

Please post this in the feedback thread stickied at the top, but only after giving some feedback to others, dont get anything for nutin in this world dude

why is it that most of the people i have encountered on this forum are douche bags. just say what u think when u hear it. if u want to give pointers then u can. not very hard..

lyons238 wrote:why is it that most of the people i have encountered on this forum are douche bags. just say what u think when u hear it. if u want to give pointers then u can. not very hard..

He's not trying to be a douche bag, he's trying to help you by directing you to the right place.

kaiori breathe wrote:

lyons238 wrote:why is it that most of the people i have encountered on this forum are douche bags. just say what u think when u hear it. if u want to give pointers then u can. not very hard..

He's not trying to be a douche bag, he's trying to help you by directing you to the right place.

seems like the right place to me. how bout dont post if u dont have anything useful to say. yes he informed me where to post for feedback but give me a break and post some feedback u fuckin n a z i s

wow, thats a nice attitude you got there mate

silentk wrote:wow, thats a nice attitude you got there mate

my attitude is fine thank you

kaiori breathe wrote:

lyons238 wrote:why is it that most of the people i have encountered on this forum are douche bags. just say what u think when u hear it. if u want to give pointers then u can. not very hard..

He's not trying to be a douche bag, he's trying to help you by directing you to the right place.

Yes, this is the case. He isn't a douche, he is pointing you to the right place.

As you can imagine there are many folks like you just getting going, as such, this forum has created a dedicated section for folks in your position to get the feedback and help they need, and as such, minimize having an unending amount of threads like this one.

As a result, I think as you continue working, you will find this forum to be a wealth of knowledge and help with tons of amazing informative threads, filled w/ members with different advice, opinions and skills.

Welcome to the DSF!

EZ nuh,
I think if you treat people with respect you will find most on here are generally pretty nice. There reason there is a separate thread for this is if everyone posted their new tunes (or works in progress) in the main production forum, it would get really cluttered really fast. Simple as that.

lyons238 wrote:

kaiori breathe wrote:

lyons238 wrote:why is it that most of the people i have encountered on this forum are douche bags. just say what u think when u hear it. if u want to give pointers then u can. not very hard..

He's not trying to be a douche bag, he's trying to help you by directing you to the right place.

seems like the right place to me. how bout dont post if u dont have anything useful to say. yes he informed me where to post for feedback but give me a break and post some feedback u fuckin n a z i s

I'd post feedback if this was in the right section you communist.

ok well its already in the wrong place and now u guys are making this thread long for no reason and no help whatsoever. honestly i dont really care if its in the wrong place. i dont live on forums. im just looking for a little help. hopefully a non forum n a z i will stumble upon this thread and say something i find helpful haha

here's a tip


jerky boyz samples and a bait triplet wobble = instant fail

love new guys

lyons238 wrote:honestly i dont really care if its in the wrong place

jolly wailer wrote:here's a tip


jerky boyz samples and a bait triplet wobble = instant fail

ya im a noob...looking for constructive criticism...

Soundcloud

what u guys think of my 1st Dnb try

tripwire22 wrote:Soundcloud

what u guys think of my 1st Dnb try

I really like it man, nice use of pads, good breaks, sounds good so far, keep working on it.

^ DSF when a new member steps out of line.

bad form coming in with an attitude like that. here's my advice anyway: this song is sort of awful. make a song with the lfo off, with the filter just half open. write a bassline worth listening to, then go back and automate only where it will -add- something rhythmically. your wobbles in this are fighting what there is of a groove. and do not sample the jerky boys. ever.
clean it up, simplify it and try again. and dont be a cock. =)