SECOND EVER SONG - LISTEN TELL ME WHERE IM GOING WRONG?

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SECOND EVER SONG - LISTEN TELL ME WHERE IM GOING WRONG?

Post by UPnose » Mon Jul 19, 2010 7:19 pm

If you could have a listen and tell me what i need to work on ect. Its my second ever song made so i know its utter tits.

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Re: SECOND EVER SONG - LISTEN TELL ME WHERE IM GOING WRONG?

Post by Basic A » Mon Jul 19, 2010 7:22 pm

Your going wrong, by breaking forum rules.

New tune.

Tell me where Im going wrong.

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Re: SECOND EVER SONG - LISTEN TELL ME WHERE IM GOING WRONG?

Post by shaneynclan » Mon Jul 19, 2010 7:27 pm

the pad/cello in the beginning sounds too robotic and static, add some movement to it.
the overall structure is decent, but the bassline sounds a little flat.
i'd spend some time working on your sound design for basslines and try to spice them up.
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Re: SECOND EVER SONG - LISTEN TELL ME WHERE IM GOING WRONG?

Post by Recessive Trait » Mon Jul 19, 2010 7:58 pm

you've got a donk where the wonk should be.

haven't you downloaded the dubstep hit template yet?
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Re: SECOND EVER SONG - LISTEN TELL ME WHERE IM GOING WRONG?

Post by UPnose » Mon Jul 19, 2010 8:06 pm

Ummmmm no. Basically just tried to teach myself and didnt use the template. Ill download it now and try to follow it.
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Re: SECOND EVER SONG - LISTEN TELL ME WHERE IM GOING WRONG?

Post by Ongelegen » Mon Jul 19, 2010 8:10 pm

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Re: SECOND EVER SONG - LISTEN TELL ME WHERE IM GOING WRONG?

Post by Sharmaji » Mon Jul 19, 2010 8:18 pm

UPnose wrote:Ummmmm no. Basically just tried to teach myself and didnt use the template. Ill download it now and try to follow it.
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