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If you could have a listen and tell me what i need to work on ect. Its my second ever song made so i know its utter tits.

Your going wrong, by breaking forum rules.

New tune.

Tell me where Im going wrong.

http://soundcloud.com/ucp-crew-extended ... at-of-july

the pad/cello in the beginning sounds too robotic and static, add some movement to it.
the overall structure is decent, but the bassline sounds a little flat.
i'd spend some time working on your sound design for basslines and try to spice them up.

you've got a donk where the wonk should be.

haven't you downloaded the dubstep hit template yet?

Ummmmm no. Basically just tried to teach myself and didnt use the template. Ill download it now and try to follow it.

UPnose wrote:Ummmmm no. Basically just tried to teach myself and didnt use the template. Ill download it now and try to follow it.