Anyone care to give feedback on my first dubstep tune?

[downngoing]

I hope it meets with approval, any constructive critique is appreciated.
It is a work in progress... DNG - "Half a Days Travel"
Check it here:
http://www.myspace.com/DownNgoinG

[vonboyage]

Pretty decent i reckon..

Intro was alright.. decent vocal samps & stuffs.. that moog bass or whatever that comes in doesn't sit with me though.

This wud sound alot better with a nice warm sub underneath
(my apologies if you actually have one, my speakers are shite mate)

the buildup of sounds is pretty cool, youve got the darkness/ambience down nicely, good job.

all IMO

I'm sure ur 2nd attempt will be something !!


That moogy thing i was talking about kinda grew on me.. the melody at least !

Theres a 2nd bass aswell, that sounds good, shuda been in there earlier IMO !

I love the breaks at the end.. really fills out the drum pattern !


Good track mate.

[downngoing]

Thx for the feedback I really do appreciate it.
I definately am gonna revisit this one for some mastering/compressing and also some arrangement/fill edits. Please keep it comin.
Cheerz,
Mark

[blip]

I like the noisy snare, the beat, the metallic percussion.
Also like the more "breaky" beat that comes in the end.
But I don't think the bass fits well, and also too much ambient chords for my taste.

What I really think is that you have two or three songs worth of material here, and that all the ideas are not fitting so well.

Cheers.

[buzznacid]

Great job man. I like the B-line. but I think Vonboyage is right on one a really fat, warm bass line to complement the moog over it would do it perfect. Or you could just raise the low end on the moog b-line, anyway Damn good job DownNgoinG. I'd mix it into a set just the way it is. Keep up the good work. So psychedelic......getting lost in it..........