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KEIRE - impossible!

http://soundcloud.com/keire/keire-impossible

Would like some feedback!

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If it's finished - http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=8&t=168124
If not - http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=8&t=168123

If you're after feedback, you're better off posting in these threads;

Works In Progress - http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=8&t=168123

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Alternatively, you could post it on the Dubs board - http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewforum.php?f=23

The piano annoyed me first, then the snare and then the vocal so I turned it off. I would suggest using a drum kit that has drums that go together and sound like they were for each other. I would bin the piano, replace it with a sample (see hip hop). The vocal, I would find a good bit from it and make a good hook out of it instead of just slapping it over a mediocre beat.

Dis a joek rite?