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This will be my first post. I have been listening to dubstep for about three months now and just started using reason three days ago. Here is the beginning of a song I am working on. The song still needs to be mixed and mastered. What do you think?

http://soundcloud.com/glenn-pagano/dubs ... t-finished

Bump. I hope this is in the right forum I got some feedback from friends. They said that I needed to work on building up to the drop and when the bass comes in it is a little weak. What can I do to make these parts better?