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Cocaine - First Track FEEDBACK PLEASE

Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2010 4:18 pm
by squidstep
Hi all, this is my first time posting here, and to start off I have a track a just put out last night. I'm looking for any and all feedback and also for any other outlets to get my music around to the right people. Thanks for any help and have a good day!

Soundcloud

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QQb-5vhvE-c

Like/Thumbs Up if you enjoy what you hear!

Re: Cocaine - First Track FEEDBACK PLEASE

Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 1:20 am
by squidstep
Bump, could really use some help, advice, or just positive reactions :|

Re: Cocaine - First Track FEEDBACK PLEASE

Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 3:32 am
by hypnos1
i like the intro. but i think the center piece of this track is the rhythmic almost tidal feeling that the bass conjures up. the cocaine sample seems out of place though. def a badass piece

Re: Cocaine - First Track FEEDBACK PLEASE

Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 4:34 pm
by jargs
I'm gonna tell the truth and say, needs a shit load of work.

Keep practising though, you'll get there in a couple years

Re: Cocaine - First Track FEEDBACK PLEASE

Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 5:18 pm
by hypnos1
jargs wrote:I'm gonna tell the truth and say, needs a shit load of work.
that's a bit ambiguous. mostly for my sake what aspects of this piece did you believe needed enhancing?

Re: Cocaine - First Track FEEDBACK PLEASE

Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 5:29 pm
by jargs
looking at some of the other tunes on this forum i guess it's not that bad in comparison actually. still its a bit stale/unoriginal.

Re: Cocaine - First Track FEEDBACK PLEASE

Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 5:38 pm
by allhellno
Needs more filth!! :]

Re: Cocaine - First Track FEEDBACK PLEASE

Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 5:57 pm
by hypnos1
allhellno wrote:Needs more filth!! :]
i cant not agree with that