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You can download my new tune from LAST.FM right now.

This is my debut tune and its present from me to you. If you like it show some respect, i got some more where that came from.

http://www.last.fm/music/Shokman/_/Its+Not+Future

shokman wrote:You can download my new tune from LAST.FM right now.

This is my debut tune and its present from me to you. If you like it show some respect, i got some more where that came from.

http://www.last.fm/music/Shokman/_/Its+Not+Future

really liking the beats, it's a good tune. but that synth sounds far too taccy, and could really do with more variation thru out the tune. and the vocal sample is a joke right? all in all a good tune but could do with more elements...which is proberbly what i'd say for my own tunes actually!

Thanks for the crit, yeah man that sample is some stupid shit but since i'm giving it away for free i thought i'd leave it.

haha fair play m8!

nice one I really like it, though it feels a bit unfinished.
The beginning is excellent but it gets a bit flat later imo, it ends without building up any tension

the is the opinion of a rookie in music production but a veteran in listening:)

Thanks for the crit, i agree to some extent it doesnt have much variation, it kinda rolls along doing the same thing, i got a bit frustrated since its been sitting in logic for months and i spent ages trying to progress it and it wasnt going nowhere!

I like the beat a lot, after it "fleshes out".
The bassline, not really, but I think it might have more to do with the sound than the notes. Agree that it lacks variation and that the sample... oh well...

Maybe what makes it seem too repetitive is the reverbed clapsnare from hell, love it but might be overwhelming for the whole tune.

that snare is wicked, my original idea was that maybe you should alter that to add some variation, like dropping some crusher+compressor+distortion on it as the track evolves to make a grimey killer of it.