dstryr-Leviathan-First try

[dstryr]

Hey everyone. I'm new to the forums here and just recently started becoming interested in dubstep. I wanted to share this drop that I just started working on and get some feedback from you guys. Let me know what you think! Also, if anyone is interested I would love to do a collab or work on a track with anyone!

The link to my track is below

dstryr

http://soundcloud.com/dstryrosbrn/leviathan

[dstryr]

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[deesee]

in all honestly without sounding like a twat, not trying to put u down or anythin but its horrible mate. in your face noises with a melody which doesnt sound very good at all and it totally overwhelms the percussion. try making somthin a little less generic maybe put bit more thought , keep it suttle the best tunes always are! try somthin bit more creative all this filth nonsense is just a bore. im really not trying to slag you off mate cos its your first tune, good effort. but dont turn into another wannabe filth producer cos they all sound the same!