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Hey Whats good,
This is my first dubstep track I'm putting back there looking for some feedback. Its a Remix of a Kid Cudi Song Called The Prayer...

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Anyways let me know what ya think.

Not bad man, I enjoyed the listen. Good for a first!
Check out my stuff I've only started recently and done a few tracks.

http://soundcloud.com/toxikdubs/

Seems like your synth part doesn't fit with the funerals original guitars. Like the notes you write. It isn't terrible, and I guess it doesn't have to be the same but your notes and the guitar doesn't complement each other. Work at it!

Intro's nice and so is the vocal. Your main synth though leaves alot to be desired as do the drums! I can see what your'e trying to do but in my humble opinion the drop needs much more dirt and a sub bass...

@toxiK Sounds pretty legit... I will have to give them a better listen with some more feedback over the next couple days.

@eldoogle Thanks for the feedback I will look into some different notes I was pretty satisfied with them but I can definitely see where you are coming from.

@simongeorgyd Thanks for the feedback holmes... This is definitely a rough mix I have left a lot to be mastered. My plans for it at this point are to work on the percussion and drums on the build ups make them a bit more interesting... Also to make a lot more dramatic drop... The drums and percussion should help but I agree a really filthy sub bass would sound sick on the drop.. This I think will be my next addition to the song.

Thanks all for your feedback... I appreciate it as I get some more time over the next day or two Im going to have to come back in and give some feedback. If any of you have a particular song I'd love to give it a listen.