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Atmospheric dubstep tune - constructive criticicism please..
Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 6:32 pm
by wascal
http://www.myspace.com/wascalmusic
the tune is 'Wascal - Perhaps', PM me if you want a 320 of it
Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 9:49 pm
by ozols man
ok i cant really comment on the bass cos im listening with ear plugs..
yeh im feeling the breaks, they sound well nice - very dj spooky-esque, i think that the loop ur using is a bit repetetive though, that cymabl and drum roll gets a bit samey, maybe u could extend it a bit? the sound effects r nuts though, it sounds like alot of time and effort went into them.. also i reckon u should work on the begining a bit, get a super fat drop going... but yeh overall it is well good, i noticed the drms change up half way too, sounding nice and broken (lol im listening as i type...)
good stuff chubs
Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 12:04 am
by flippo
awesome mate. really. love the low-fi sampled drums, they have a trip-hop flavour to them. Dunno if I would call it dubstep though.
Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 1:14 am
by relik
really feeling this. nice and raw and loving all the chops on that break...more of a jungle tip production style. i've been thinking about chopping up breaks for some dubstep tunes, but haven't gotten to it yet. feeling juvenile delinquent too.
Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 8:51 am
by pompoushit
yeah mate, really cool one. maybe that kick is a bit too hard though im digging it at the same time
maybe i would layer another kick over it with a more ounchy sound.
Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 11:49 am
by wascal
Glad you like it
Its my first crack at jungle influenced dubstep vibes, theres a new bit up on myspace now called 'Octagon' which is much more electronic sounding. As for the bassdrum, I had a crack at replacing/layering it but that crunchy kick is such a part of the tune I've decided to leave it as is for the mo.
Cheers for the feedback, always welcome
Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 12:12 pm
by skyence
yah, nice work!
i just think the kick is too heavy.
you could put either more sub in it or cut the midrange-frequencies of it - it just takes too much frequency-space as it is now, i think.
the arrangement is wicke' - there's not much going on but always something new in the background/atmosphere - like it!
like those sampled drums!
keep going, i really dig your stuff!
cheers