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First ever dubstep track, need feedback

Post by potpan » Sun Jan 30, 2011 8:32 am

I am very new to producing and this is the first full track I have done. I am trying to get the mix just right, and I am looking for anyfeed back. Thanks!
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Re: First ever dubstep track, need feedback

Post by Briggs » Sun Jan 30, 2011 2:18 pm

i like ur bassline kinda dark dub style, the drums need to change up a bit more, and ive been told this about my own dubs aswell, seems a little repetitive u need to switch up ur melody and bassline a few times and u shud be good. jus my opinion

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Re: First ever dubstep track, need feedback

Post by potpan » Sun Jan 30, 2011 6:11 pm

what did you think of the end? You think it was too abrupt? I don't know if i want to change it because I like the minimalist feel at the end with the egg roll.

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Re: First ever dubstep track, need feedback

Post by Briggs » Sun Jan 30, 2011 10:55 pm

double up the end mayb fade out?

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Re: First ever dubstep track, need feedback

Post by PR1NCE » Mon Jan 31, 2011 12:09 am

add some drums and snares before you just throw in the wobbles..needs a better intro.. but im diggin the feel to it! keep it up man, what SYnth u workin with bud?
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Re: First ever dubstep track, need feedback

Post by potpan » Mon Jan 31, 2011 12:34 am

PR1NCE wrote:add some drums and snares before you just throw in the wobbles..needs a better intro.. but im diggin the feel to it! keep it up man, what SYnth u workin with bud?
Yeah i think the intro is a little bit muddy sounding to me, but i want to do something with that kind of feedback loop ambient sounds and overdrive lead. I want it to sound more like 16 bit Nintendo music though. The wobble synth is thor, and the other sounds are modified presets in Reason. I modified some tutorial I found line which i can't seem to find for the wobble.

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