[Feedback] Sun is going down
Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 10:21 pm
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Re: [Feedback] Sun is going down
Posted: Fri Feb 11, 2011 4:01 pm
Steady beats and nice ideas, just dont like the vocal
Re: [Feedback] Sun is going down
Posted: Fri Feb 11, 2011 5:14 pm
weee! what a banger! i can see this dropping like a bomb in the dancefloor! to be honest, it's a bit like "sweet shop" just actually good 
now, my criticism would be: the kick in the 4/4 passage of the intro is too snappy, you should use a more housy kick for that. just a nice thumping one. in the second buildup the kicks could start off a bit quieter and rise in volume. also the wobbles and the vocals at once don't work well, they are great but you should keep 'em out of the melodic passages as they're atonal by nature. and a miiiinor complaint about the snare, could use a tad more send verb. apart from that: big tune!
i'm going to do a mix tomorrow and would like to use as many good tunes from the dubs section as possible. now i see this is not a full version you uploaded, if you'd still feel like sending me a 320 i'd be very happy!
if you don't trust a random stranger from the internet like me about unallowedly sharing your tune, there's a way to watermark your mp3-files i read a post about in the production forum, i could look that up for you if you want.
cheers!
now, my criticism would be: the kick in the 4/4 passage of the intro is too snappy, you should use a more housy kick for that. just a nice thumping one. in the second buildup the kicks could start off a bit quieter and rise in volume. also the wobbles and the vocals at once don't work well, they are great but you should keep 'em out of the melodic passages as they're atonal by nature. and a miiiinor complaint about the snare, could use a tad more send verb. apart from that: big tune!
i'm going to do a mix tomorrow and would like to use as many good tunes from the dubs section as possible. now i see this is not a full version you uploaded, if you'd still feel like sending me a 320 i'd be very happy!
if you don't trust a random stranger from the internet like me about unallowedly sharing your tune, there's a way to watermark your mp3-files i read a post about in the production forum, i could look that up for you if you want.
cheers!