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Your drums are very unimaginative. So much so that even 4 bars of them are annoying, so 5 minutes of them is gonna kill me. The sounds you've used aren't right either. Sound almost unedited. Some of your wobs are cool, I like the deep wob in the section at 2:30. Structurally this is all over the place too, there's no intro, drop, A, B, A, B etc. It seems random. I think you need to get a proper structure before we even consider the production flaws in this. I sound like I'm being harsh here, but I'm just saying the truth. So, I suggest you get a nice proper intro, minus any bass, and then sit down and think how you're going to structure your bassline. Very often people try and cram in too many ideas, so pick your 3 or 4 favourite bass parts and just loop them together until you have something workable. There are PLENTY of amazing tips on all things from structure to composition to production to just about everything, over in the Production forum. Have a gander over there man. Like I say, I'm not being harsh deliberately, i think the tune isn't bad, it just needs a lot of work.

Thanks man i appreciate it