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vyvyan
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by vyvyan » Fri Feb 25, 2011 10:55 pm
HI!
I think there are some good things into it. It's for me too wobbly, but that's more a question of taste here. U've got some meldoies which could be good by the way. A few tips:
The second one is the most completed, but you should shorten it. 4minutes would be good.
More variations in rythm would be good also.
And try to make more mixing of your tracks: the sound would be much better. Put some echo on the sounds, this would give some more volume to the sounds.
Also, structurate more your tracks, it would give more interest!
Good basis by the way, keep in touch!
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creeP1g
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- Joined: Fri Jan 14, 2011 8:37 pm
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by creeP1g » Sat Feb 26, 2011 5:51 pm
vyvyan wrote:HI!
I think there are some good things into it. It's for me too wobbly, but that's more a question of taste here. U've got some meldoies which could be good by the way. A few tips:
The second one is the most completed, but you should shorten it. 4minutes would be good.
More variations in rythm would be good also.
And try to make more mixing of your tracks: the sound would be much better. Put some echo on the sounds, this would give some more volume to the sounds.
Also, structurate more your tracks, it would give more interest!
Good basis by the way, keep in touch!
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Thanks for good feedback man ill try my best to make it sound better;D
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