Kid Around - Erection Jackson (130 bpm ish)

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Kid Around - Erection Jackson (130 bpm ish)

Post by ora_blu » Sun Feb 27, 2011 8:59 pm

hey hey,

i am working on this tune for quite some time now...
think I have a problem with just leaving stuff ...

anyways, any thoughts on the mix or arrangement would be much appreciated.

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Re: Kid Around - Erection Jackson (130 bpm ish)

Post by faultier » Mon Feb 28, 2011 9:55 am

the mixdown is alright in my opinion (but i'm listening on not so good headphones), i really like the synth work and the groove you have going on

but i feel the track is a bit too repetitive and doesnt seem to go anywhere, note i'm not a big fan of minimal so that could be just me
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Re: Kid Around - Erection Jackson (130 bpm ish)

Post by rhek » Mon Feb 28, 2011 5:49 pm

Pads need to be thicker. Vox sticks out too much because there aren't enough elements to glue it in. Low end is nice, got a good groove. Nice edits.
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Re: Kid Around - Erection Jackson (130 bpm ish)

Post by ora_blu » Tue Mar 01, 2011 1:08 pm

thank you guys

kind of have the same feeling about the pad...
somethings missin in the mid range.
maybe i'll get back on it later...
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Re: Kid Around - Erection Jackson (130 bpm ish)

Post by bigfootspartan » Tue Mar 01, 2011 6:51 pm

That's a killer percussion you have going on, it's complex and groovy without being overly annoying or pretentious. I was thinking maybe some stabs with some delay and reverb could accent some parts, but then again that could ruin the atmosphere you've got going on. The mixdown sounds pretty solid!
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Re: Kid Around - Erection Jackson (130 bpm ish)

Post by djrobyn » Tue Mar 01, 2011 7:29 pm

love it!
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Re: Kid Around - Erection Jackson (130 bpm ish)

Post by ora_blu » Thu Mar 03, 2011 1:59 pm

thanks!
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Re: Kid Around - Erection Jackson (130 bpm ish)

Post by ora_blu » Sun Mar 06, 2011 6:13 pm

bump
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Re: Kid Around - Erection Jackson (130 bpm ish)

Post by Biggls » Sun Mar 06, 2011 7:38 pm

intro started to get a bit boring but i can see why you made it that length. Nice grooves. Might be able to bit a little more lo end to the kick. just a tad. other than that it's sounding sick bro :)
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Re: Kid Around - Erection Jackson (130 bpm ish)

Post by ora_blu » Mon Mar 07, 2011 12:07 pm

thanks!
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Re: Kid Around - Erection Jackson (130 bpm ish)

Post by ora_blu » Fri Mar 11, 2011 4:44 pm

bump :P
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