"Static" - My first attempt at dubstep

Renin · Post by **Renin** » Tue Mar 01, 2011 1:34 am

I've lurked this forum previously, but have never registered. I registered today to see if I could get some feedback on what is my first dubstep attempt. I go by the artist name, "Renin". Please, don't go easy on me. I can take harsh criticism

Anyways, I named it "Static", since that's more catchy than "Dubstep Test".

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Shiver me timbers.

DoctorPlease · Post by **DoctorPlease** » Tue Mar 01, 2011 1:37 am

Not too bad for a first try. ive definaately heard worse.
it sounds groggy and drainy...
the visual image of the main chorus is... a toothless whore...vomiting
(thats not a good thing)
but the outro is fucking SICK! you just got way to "filthy" in the drop.
Keep working at it, you have potential.

Renin · Post by **Renin** » Tue Mar 01, 2011 1:43 am

This is why I registered here! I don't get feedback like this on other forums. Well that's awesome that you don't think it's bad for a first try, and I'd have to agree with you that the chorus has a horrible drippy crappiness to it.
I now have a formant filter and a bitcrusher, which I didn't have before, so I hope my next attempt will be an improvement.

DoctorPlease · Post by **DoctorPlease** » Tue Mar 01, 2011 1:48 am

Ah yes, me too. Only here are they brutally honest

And thats great you got new plug ins but you must always remember its not the colors, its how you paint with them!

Renin · Post by **Renin** » Tue Mar 01, 2011 3:31 am

Absolutely

I'm whipping up something new right now that's less muddy.

DoctorPlease · Post by **DoctorPlease** » Tue Mar 01, 2011 3:55 am

Cant wait to hear it

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