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Sparx-Lonely Trees (Not-Filth)
Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2011 3:12 pm
by Ludovico
Hey DSF
Check out my song:
Soundcloud
Thanks for your time\feedback (optimistically assuming you gave some
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Re: Sparx-Lonely Trees (Not-Filth)
Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2011 4:49 pm
by hutyluty
Whoo, the panning at the start sets it up really nicely- i also really like the analogue feel going on with the distortion on the syths.
You might want to look at the harmonies created by the subs, i'm not sure the notes the subs playing are quite in key with the rest of it (could well be wrong though)
Alsoo, maybe when the melody comes in around 1:40 you could perhaps have a breakdown to let the new melody gain full force in the song (or at 2:05
Very nice tune though mate, really enjoyed it
Re: Sparx-Lonely Trees (Not-Filth)
Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2011 8:21 pm
by Ludovico
Cheers mate, will so some edits tommorow taking that into account.