[FEEDBACK] The Loon (just right)

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[FEEDBACK] The Loon (just right)

Post by Dupe » Thu Mar 10, 2011 4:46 pm

Wasn't really sure how to categorize this one in the (~) area, and its been a while since i have posted for any feedback on here, but I figured some constructive criticism is always useful. This is a track ive been workin on for a bit, I was really seeking the minimal percussion, please let me know what you guys think.

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Re: [FEEDBACK] The Loon (just right)

Post by hutyluty » Thu Mar 10, 2011 5:12 pm

This is massive track!
the bass and percussion are proper tight, the meody is also really quite nice especially in the breakdown, but i'm not sure it's intune with the bass? could be deliberate haunting dissonance but yeah

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Re: [FEEDBACK] The Loon (just right)

Post by LukeRaith » Thu Mar 10, 2011 6:07 pm

quality raw bass mate! the melody works well with it, only thing id change is add a few more hats to the drums, to give it a bit more rhythm! :)
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Re: [FEEDBACK] The Loon (just right)

Post by Dupe » Thu Mar 10, 2011 11:29 pm

Hell yeah fellas, thanks for the feedback. I was worried that the melody was too much, but i think im just gonna go back and clean it up a bit, fade it in, etc. I was definitely going for a more dissonant feel for it. As far as more hats, i definitely think your right, at least in the second alternate for the bass line. This along with some equalizing should really make it pop

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Re: [FEEDBACK] The Loon (just right)

Post by antman » Fri Mar 11, 2011 12:06 am

Wow man. MONSTER, is there anyway I can have a download for my ipod?
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Re: [FEEDBACK] The Loon (just right)

Post by Dupe » Fri Mar 11, 2011 6:26 am

free 320's will be coming within the next few days, follow me on soundcloud so you get the update when it gets posted,

thanks for the listen by the way! dont worry, you'll get a download soon
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