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[feedback] Body without Organs - Nocturne (deep, chilled)

Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 2:43 am
by Body without Organs
just been playing around with some basic scales on the keyboard but i think i might be on to a potentially good track. very chilled four tet-esque kinda tune. any feedback or comments greatly appreciated

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the rest of my music can be found on my youtube channel (http://www.youtube.com/user/BwOdubstep) if you're interested

cheers

Re: [feedback] Body without Organs - Nocturne (chilled)

Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 8:08 am
by drew408
Liking the Direction your going in. Try to layer that piano sounding instrument with another instrument to thicken it up, maybe at a lower octave. And some side chain compression on the sub bass that will duck the kick and snare slightly so they can come out more in the mix. Liking it a lot!

Re: [feedback] Body without Organs - Nocturne (chilled)

Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2011 12:54 am
by Body without Organs
cheers man. i've noticed that while the levels are good on headphones on laptop speakers the hihats come out too loudly; is there a way to sidestep this?

Re: [feedback] Body without Organs - Nocturne (chilled)

Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2011 12:58 am
by ice-nine
Enjoying the chord changes! Can't beat a bit of piano, great stuff!

Re: [feedback] Body without Organs - Nocturne (deep, chilled

Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2011 2:41 pm
by Body without Organs
safe

Re: [feedback] Body without Organs - Nocturne (deep, chilled

Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2011 3:41 pm
by musicofnibiru
I really like the piano writing. For a final track it does need some layering. You can even use different instruments at different points and have them weave in and out.