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rajske zastupitelstvo - my first track, looking for feedback
Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 9:34 pm
by oldasadlo
hi, this is my first kind of harsh dubstepish attempt, gimme feedback please.
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Re: rajske zastupitelstvo - my first track, looking for feed
Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 9:53 pm
by drew408
Chords on a pad are my personal way of setting the "mood" of a track. I don't feel emotion in this, just a bunch of synths. Play some chords with progession and it brings it to life.
Re: rajske zastupitelstvo - my first track, looking for feed
Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 10:41 pm
by Body without Organs
it moves very slowly and sounds like youve got a very low bpm here, dubstep is usually around 140. could do with some tighter structuring as well, it's all very disjointed
Re: rajske zastupitelstvo - my first track, looking for feed
Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 11:22 pm
by melodium747
not a bad first attempt man. The only thing I would say is that it seem a little unorganized, like there are things come from all over the place kinda hurts the ears but don't get offended by that. Those are just my two cents

keep it up man I can tell your gonna get a lot better!

Re: rajske zastupitelstvo - my first track, looking for feed
Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2011 7:01 pm
by oldasadlo
thank you all, the advice about pad chords seems really valuable. and yes, tune is really too chaotic. crooked and unstable rhythms is what i personally seek in dubstep, but you certainly have to find some balance
