Piano Man (WIP)

[Geeza]

Hi I have a track for feedback something Ive been working on for not that long but would like people's views on it.

It's called piano man with a few samples off of High Rankin's sample pack. So please take a listen and tell me what you think.

Also if you have a track for critique please link me to it and Ill take a listen Ive found some real gems on here recently so keep up the good work.

Piano Man (wip)
Soundcloud

[OGP]

it's nice, sounds really industrial, keep pushing it, I think it will turn out real good

[kaiori breathe]

Sounds nice, but it drags a little for me, might just be personal taste though, i see a lot of tracks like that, and i can never tell whether it's a style thing or if it's geniunely just dragging... personally i'd cut the intro in half, drop the mid section, and go straight to that drop at the end, then just extend the drop and vary it and then go to a breakdown/midsection, then drop again, then outro, but that's just me, as it is now it's fine, productions pretty good, got some nice sounds in there and your stabby piano chord sequence is good, i think something a bit nastier and more metallic than that reese wouldnt go amiss either. Most of that is just personal taste though.

[Geeza]

Thanks for the feedback guys!!

@OGP thanks, if your interested I'll sort you out a 320 when its done

@kaiori breathe, thanks for the feedback, yeah it does drag your right but I haven't decided what direction i wanna take it in. I'll deffinately add in some effects and vary the drum loop especially when the reese kicks in. I think i may get rid of the reese though and like you said add something more metaliic i have a few massive pacthes i could work with so may give that a try. Again thanks for the feedback appreciate it