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				REALLY NEED SOME CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM :0
				Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2011 3:34 pm
				by Blastfome
				Hey everyone. Just wanted to throw this new track up that I just made. I'm only 19 and this is my 2nd track that I would call legit. Just workin on finding my sound and keeping the listener's attention. I really would love feedback on what you like and what I should try to focus on more. I'm trying to improve! Thanks in advance  

 P.S. It's the first track of course. Not the one in my sig.
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				Re: REALLY NEED SOME CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM :0
				Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2011 8:17 pm
				by bv
				i think its a real good start man i personally would have some sub bass on the track and make it sound full. it sounds very bland but like i said this is a very good start to the song man keep it up
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				Re: REALLY NEED SOME CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM :0
				Posted: Mon Mar 28, 2011 3:29 pm
				by Blastfome
				Thanks man. Yea, i've been listenin to a lot of dubstep artists lately and i've noticed I can always manage to hear subass in some way  

  So i'm definately gunna start adding itto my tunes. Thanks for the advice bro!
 
			
					
				Re: REALLY NEED SOME CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM :0
				Posted: Mon Mar 28, 2011 3:38 pm
				by continuumdnb
				some nice ideas here, i like the quick delay on the vocals. As previously mentioned you could do with a lot more low end on your synths. I don't think it's just subbass you need though (which is generally a sine wave in the 40-80hz range) but some sort of more-bassy synth an octave or two lower than your primary one will help the song sound a bit more full.
			 
			
					
				Re: REALLY NEED SOME CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM :0
				Posted: Mon Mar 28, 2011 8:17 pm
				by Nickelwound
				Id say progressions... you know, chord changes and stuff, maybe a build up. But then again im not really an expert into the soundscaping of a production, so yeah that was my two cents, I thought it sounded nice, especially if its your second track. All I can say is keep making tracks man :].
			 
			
					
				Re: REALLY NEED SOME CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM :0
				Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2011 12:22 am
				by Blastfome
				Thanks guys! Love th advice. I'm starting to realize that sub bass can be the key to success...
			 
			
					
				Re: REALLY NEED SOME CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM :0
				Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2011 1:55 am
				by FuhNetIk
				MOAR SYNTHS AND WOBBLEZ - 
Joking aside, loved the intro, I would try to add more variation, your vowel sounding bass is really good, but i'd personally try to throw more in there. Also learn to <3 the subs 

 
			
					
				Re: REALLY NEED SOME CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM :0
				Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2011 1:55 am
				by FuhNetIk
				MOAR SYNTHS AND WOBBLEZ - 
Joking aside, loved the intro, I would try to add more variation, your vowel sounding bass is really good, but i'd personally try to throw more in there. Also learn to <3 the subs 

 
			
					
				Re: REALLY NEED SOME CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM :0
				Posted: Fri Apr 01, 2011 5:03 am
				by Blastfome
				haha, alrighty, thanks! Can anyone give my some tips on how to make GOOD sub bass? I've made decent stuff, but it sounds to much like noise. I just want massive hidden bass! lol
			 
			
					
				Re: REALLY NEED SOME CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM :0
				Posted: Fri Apr 01, 2011 12:16 pm
				by continuumdnb
				RE: sub bass:
continuumdnb wrote:(which is generally a sine wave in the 40-80hz range) .
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Your clap and snare are panned a bit too hard to each side as well, the listener shouldn't really be able to separate them.